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That last post felt like I'd just stumbled upon the diary of a serial killer open to a random page. WTF?

Bah, Hisao has no game. He should have invited her in and offered to let her 'even the score' with Yorza by staying over if she was so concerned about it. Hell, his makeshift bedding should still be on the floor where he left it which would back up his story that nothing actually happened.

...what's the JSL sign for "Boo!"

obvious ending was obvious. Great quality fic here though, if not always enjoyable to read.

I wasn't really much of a Misha fan, but you're winning me over with all this awesome.

Guest90206 wrote:

Leaty wrote:blah blah not really interested in male half of Yamaku

Yuriyuriyuriyuriyuriyuriyuriyuriyuriyuriyuriyuriyuriyuri.

You know you want to.

Don't try and deny it >=_=>

...this is also acceptable.

mocha-scented yuri goggles, check.

Nah, no way that's fixable now. Miki is too entangled in the whole mess for him to deal with it now even if he does get over Lilly and she forgives him for the slap. It's all become just one big goridian knot of a problem to be dealt with abruptly.

Okay... read it again, and it all makes terrible sense now. Lilly does still love him, and even though she met some great guy she could potentially fall for just as hard she still isn't over Hisao yet. She's lonely and has that HASD to deal with, so Akira is setting her up with random dudes, but the...

I'm actually more than a little confused here... just what is Lilly's actual motivation? If it was just pointless sex she was looking for she's found it, but it doesn't satisfy her. Then she says she HAS found someone that could replace Hisao, but she just wants sex from him? She says she's stopped ...

Really? Huh. My biggest complaint about Rin's route is how difficult Hisao kept making everything by constantly misunderstanding the situation. I thought she more or less made sense all the time, so it was quite frustrating to watch him blunder about the place and make a mess of everything.

That last one could benefit from another proofreading pass-through, but otherwise good stuff.

Egads this thread is just an ugly mess. I mean I rather like Shizune and Lilly's route somewhat annoys me, but what does one really have to do with the other? It's not a zero-sum game, guys.

Oddball wrote:Hmm... Misha and Hanako. Now there's a hell of an odd couple for you. I wonder if anybody has actually ever tried to write that.

I've seen such, but it was rather unpleasant in a 'women's prison' sort of way.

I expected you'd be able to do a great version Rin, and I am not at all disappointed! :D Perhaps, though, it is a matter of one-sided love – one of them confessed, Usually that dash would be better as either an em dash (with no spaces on either side) or a semicolon. You do this a couple times, other...