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by nemz
Sun May 20, 2012 4:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20
Replies: 54
Views: 18433

Re: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20

Perhaps both? It's not like intercourse and orgasm are unrelated topics.

If you just replace "Curry" with "Rain" in her 4 things moment it works out quite well, making sense both in terms of a single thoughtstream and as a summary of the entire short story.
by nemz
Sun May 20, 2012 4:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20
Replies: 54
Views: 18433

Re: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20

Perhaps a missed opportunity to use an old metaphor for orgasm as "clouds and rain"? Seems particularly appropriate for Rin for the use of rain and clouds as symbols throughout her route... as well as her soaking her pillow in such a fashion.
by nemz
Sun May 20, 2012 6:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Deus Ex: Katawa Revolution (Complete)
Replies: 63
Views: 16800

Re: Deus Ex: Katawa Revolution (Complete)

Did I say otherwise? An augment would be the best available artificial option. For a natural option the best would be to use a heart cloned from your own cells, but in the case of a congenital defect like Hisao's it might be just replacing one defective heart with another. You might also notice that...
by nemz
Sat May 19, 2012 7:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Deus Ex: Katawa Revolution (Complete)
Replies: 63
Views: 16800

Re: Deus Ex: Katawa Revolution (Complete)

I, personally, would rather not take drugs of any kind. If someone decides the benefits of mentally controlling one's hearts functions (as opposed to have a computer do it, which would probabaly do a better job at it) justify a lifelong addiction to drugs, that is their decision. Of course there wo...
by nemz
Sat May 19, 2012 4:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 02/26/2015*
Replies: 124
Views: 64440

Re: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED*

Yep, gotta get all the expected preliminaries out of the way. Will be nice to see the story get truely started though.
by nemz
Sat May 19, 2012 1:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Griffon8's Writing | New: We DeepEnd On Each Other
Replies: 19
Views: 18745

Re: Griffon8's Writing Center | New: Questions With And With

That last Rin one seemed rather 'meh' but the Lily one was definately a nice addition to the canon story. I agree, that really didn't sit well with me at all in the game as it gives the impression that she's motivated more by pity than love.
by nemz
Sat May 19, 2012 12:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Deus Ex: Katawa Revolution (Complete)
Replies: 63
Views: 16800

Re: Deus Ex: Katawa Revolution (Part 5 Posted)

I clarify my earlier statement to "in any conscious way". Yes, the heart is a muscle and as such receives impulses from the brain. However you do not need to consciously control these impulses, so any regulation can be done by a computer. We do have working artificial hearts today. We do not have w...
by nemz
Fri May 18, 2012 12:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 257656

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/15/2012 (mature content)

Nice wall of judgmental psychobabble and all, but... the future refused to change. (insert Lavos noise here) 'True selves' and 'souls' don't exist, nor is a philosophy made more or less relevant by the effort required to uphold it. You're right in saying Hisao and Rika should do what they want, but ...
by nemz
Thu May 17, 2012 11:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82021

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1

Honestly I don't see why you assume it has anything to do with this fic.
by nemz
Thu May 17, 2012 5:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 207
Views: 109888

Re: Shower Scenes

Waiting for the inevitable turnabout... guy's showers being worked on and some of the girls displaying far less sensitivity while Hisao uses their facilities.
by nemz
Thu May 17, 2012 6:57 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Music that makes you think of KS
Replies: 809
Views: 201281

Re: Music that makes you think of KS

What Do I Have To Do by Stabbing Westward is IMHO pretty much the perfect soundtrack for the more frustrating aspects of Rin's route.

Enjoy the Silence by Depeche Mode seems fitting for Shizune as well, and not just in a smartass sort of way.
by nemz
Thu May 17, 2012 3:51 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Team Shizune vs Team Lilly
Replies: 433
Views: 81615

Re: Team Shizune vs Team Lilly

Megumeru wrote:...makes me kinda' wonder what she'll do if she wants to eat durians or pomegranates
Offer to pay a local grocer extra for a little help? It's not that hard.
by nemz
Wed May 16, 2012 4:06 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Team Shizune vs Team Lilly
Replies: 433
Views: 81615

Re: Team Shizune vs Team Lilly

...except it's practically outright stated at the end of Rin's arc that Hisao is still fairly far away from truly understanding Rin. I think you might want to reread her good ending again. Agreed. I actually prefer the brutal neutral ending for Rin because Hisao just doesn't get her. Of course nobo...
by nemz
Wed May 16, 2012 3:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596622

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 5/16)

Another fine addition to a charming story!

I'm a bit disappointed in Hisao though. First he misses an obvious opportunity to share his affliction, then he doesn't walk with her to her room or at least the girls' dorm's front door? For shame, sir.
by nemz
Wed May 16, 2012 12:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 257656

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/8/2012 (mature content)

Rikabro wrote:It is precisely the kind of thing I care about. I've actually thought a lot about what her theme song would be, myself.
I think I'd go with something by The Birthday Massacre... Kill the Lights perhaps?