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No, but I know it's hebrew just by looking at it. No idea what it says, but I don't really care either.

it's just hebrew, should be easy enough to translate online if you really care.

Well you could always clarify it by having Lilly know exactly where Niji is while she's listening, if you know what I mean.

I'm fairly certain you're wrong here, though I can see how you might come to that conclusion. Would you mind explaining that one to me? Maybe I'd better rework this a bit, then. I literally didn't intend to evoke images of someone screwing a dog. Oh, man. :( I think s/he got that idea from the endi...

"No Hisao. You are the feminists." and then he was Kenji.

Ah, this is such a fun read. You give all the little background folk such a spark of life, making even the jerky ones a little endearing in their disgruntled jerkitude.

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I'm fairly certain you're wrong here, though I can see how you might come to that conclusion.

Well, it is somewhat implied... a bit creepy, but such is life sometimes.

Wow... that had to be some master-class trolling.

At least it ended on a happy note. Takashi does look like a smug asshole, though I imagine he'll fit much better in an art school than Rin.

Also, Hisao's relatability plummets when he goes along with her request: the proper response there is "you're crazy, lady" followed by a quick exit. That probably the proper response to Rika in any context, honestly... assuming one isn't already harboring some deep self-destrctive issues and feels ...

Jigoro sort of reminds me of a grown-up Tatewaki Kuno. Perhaps her mom was a pseudo-Nabiki? That would explain quite a lot, honestly. As comedy her family is a good thing, but it does make her route harder to take seriously and throws the whole tone of the story into disarray. I feel like this middl...

Nah, it's too ridiculous to be mad about. I just wonder if this will end up more gory than Doomish's stuff or not.

I find it rather odd that nobody asks Ritsu to explain why she has 'riddles' for clues, as surreal as that sounds. Could be handled easy enough with just a couple lines of dialog.

Gah! This was supposed to be a short bridge to the next scene, but it took on a life of it's own, and now it's a fully fledged scene. I kinda wish it had stayed that, honestly. Who takes the time to think things out like this in the middle of a tense conversation? Short, choppy bits between spoken ...