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by nemz
Thu May 31, 2012 8:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Where the Painting Should Be ~ Rin Neutral End
Replies: 9
Views: 3414

Re: Where the Painting Should Be ~ Rin Neutral End

Good stuff here.

Still, I wonder what it is about the neutral ending that people just won't leave alone despite feeling like the most honest ending. Sometimes things just don't work out, people. Happy endings are lies created by stopping the story when it's most convenient.
by nemz
Thu May 31, 2012 7:21 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Venting about Shizune's Bad ending...
Replies: 182
Views: 74150

Re: Venting about Shizune's Bad ending...

I like how you suggest that my friends and I are dicks for wanting to avoid awkward friendships (sure, some might be able to get over something like that, but I've never seen it work out) It's only awkward if you make it awkward. If you REALLY want them as a friend then that means accepting them as...
by nemz
Thu May 31, 2012 6:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 14
Views: 4278

Re: Besties [Suzu/Miki One-shot] [Explicit Content!]

Wait a sec... was that '4 max' a joke about her only having 4 non-thumb fingers?
by nemz
Wed May 30, 2012 11:03 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Venting about Shizune's Bad ending...
Replies: 182
Views: 74150

Re: Venting about Shizune's Bad ending...

Again, I'm saying that I have personally never seen something like that work out. Creates an awkward tension, plus I doubt strong feelings simply fade away. Then it's quite likely you and all your friends are just dicks. The zoner made an offer, take it or leave it. It's only awkward until the zone...
by nemz
Wed May 30, 2012 10:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 14
Views: 4278

Re: Besties [Suzu/Miki One-shot] [Explicit Content!]

Japanese schools have class on saturdays.

...and 4 fingers is fine but the mighty stumpfist is out of bounds? wtf Snoozu?
by nemz
Wed May 30, 2012 9:52 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Venting about Shizune's Bad ending...
Replies: 182
Views: 74150

Re: Venting about Shizune's Bad ending...

A friendship is never gonna be the same again after something like that. Never heard of a single instance where things worked out. Always ends up causing people way more pain than necessary. So like I said, that's not really friendzoning so much as a nice way of saying go away. The zoned person can...
by nemz
Wed May 30, 2012 6:17 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Venting about Shizune's Bad ending...
Replies: 182
Views: 74150

Re: Venting about Shizune's Bad ending...

I still don't think that's reasonable at all. You don't just keep someone around whom you friendzoned. If you REALLY friendzoned them then yes, that's exactly what you do... treat like any other friend. If you instead give them the 'friends' line but then ditch them out of awkwardness then you're b...
by nemz
Wed May 30, 2012 1:17 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Venting about Shizune's Bad ending...
Replies: 182
Views: 74150

Re: Venting about Shizune's Bad ending...

Why are you assuming Misha immediately acted like nothing happened? It's entirely possible she was distant and sad for a while before deciding to accept Shizune's offer to just be friends. There's also the whole 'first time with a boy' line hinting it's probably not her first time overall, so perhap...
by nemz
Tue May 29, 2012 11:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596631

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 5/29)

This story in one word: "Adorkable"
by nemz
Tue May 29, 2012 2:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 14751

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

Can't you people decide what you want? It seems to me that the suggestions have been entirely consistent: Either ALL thoughts are italics or none of it should be (preferably the latter). Doublespace between paragraphs. Start a new paragraph when changing speakers. Use proper spelling, punctuation a...
by nemz
Tue May 29, 2012 1:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 14751

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

This story is so damned frustrating, and I don't mean just the content. Stop it with the italics already and doublespace your paragraphs... making the story physically harder to read is a bad plan.
by nemz
Tue May 29, 2012 12:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 257659

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/15/2012 (mature content)

I actually agree with this. Ditto. I don't agree with you about the similarities to Rin's route, though. Well, actually, as I write that, I realize there are some similar themes of alienation, but only superficially so. Rin is alienated from everybody else in a way unique to her, whereas Rika and H...
by nemz
Mon May 28, 2012 10:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 14751

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

I feel a tad of irony here, since the popular consensus on the forums seemed to be that Hisao was a total tool for just letting Lilly leave like that. Popular consensus among Lillybros, maybe. I was actually annoyed that I got her good ending first, as she really pissed me off at the end. So did Ha...
by nemz
Mon May 28, 2012 5:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 14751

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

If you're reading this it means that you didn't stop me from going, and it saddens me that you didn't. Geez, and I thought the end of that route pissed me off before. She not only has built this relationship up to fail knowing she was on a clock the entire time and tried to hide this inevitable con...
by nemz
Sun May 27, 2012 8:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Emotional Night.. (Hanako and Hisao)
Replies: 19
Views: 6546

Re: An Emotional Night.. (Hanako and Hisao)

If your objective was to resolve everything so quickly I actually think it would make more sense to extend the argument then transition directly to Hanako initiating angry sex.