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by Roamin12
Fri Jun 08, 2012 12:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Taxi ride to nowhere
Replies: 34
Views: 7240

Re: Taxi ride to nowhere

I felt my hopes getting up near the end, until that last line.You glorious bastard, you.
by Roamin12
Fri Jun 08, 2012 12:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manly Pick-Me-Up (Post Hanako Bad End)
Replies: 14
Views: 4720

Re: The Manly Pick-Me-Up

This was great, I love short little stories like this.
lolawesome wrote: I don't know why, but I love writing Kenji
Same here, his type of insanity is very fun to read and write.
by Roamin12
Fri Jun 08, 2012 12:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 387265

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 6/6)

I loved this chapter so much! You, sir, are a fantastic writer.
by Roamin12
Wed Jun 06, 2012 1:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Facing my Pains
Replies: 115
Views: 15203

Re: Facing my Pains

I think in an earlier chapter you said he would run only short distances now because of his injury. Why would that even be an issue if he only ever ran the 100m anyway? Somehow the second half of this chapter felt like someone had pushed the fast forward button. There are a few other things that pu...
by Roamin12
Tue Jun 05, 2012 12:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Truth About Kenji (a short fanfic in three acts)
Replies: 32
Views: 5696

Re: The Truth About Kenji (a short fanfic in three acts)

I'm going to assume the doctor being named Allen is a vague reference to one of your other stories (I think it was yours) where Hisao says that Nurse seems like an 'Allen' to him. Or am I wrong on that? We warned you about it, Hisao. You should have listened to us and stayed away, Hisao. None of us ...
by Roamin12
Mon Jun 04, 2012 2:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 205
Views: 68392

Re: Shower Scenes

Okay. Chapter 2 has been edited. I thank you all for your support. Chapter 3 is ... kinda coming along. Still working on it. The good news is the chapter after that is almost finished so when I do update there won't be a huge gap between the updates. I thought there were only three parts, but I'm n...
by Roamin12
Mon Jun 04, 2012 1:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Truth About Kenji (a short fanfic in three acts)
Replies: 32
Views: 5696

Re: The Truth About Kenji

since it's already mentioned, yes Kenji was all in Hisao's mind I actually guessed that as well once I finished the story, and I was right? Well, that's a new one. But can you guess the REAL twist? Yamaku is actually a secret government program created to study the affects on human psyche by genera...
by Roamin12
Mon Jun 04, 2012 1:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kenji's Fantasy
Replies: 4
Views: 988

Re: Kenji's Fantasy

Wait, Kenji, not spouting nonsense about a Feminist Agenda and generally being crazy? What have you done to Kenji! (On another note, this certainly looks promising.)
by Roamin12
Tue May 29, 2012 9:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Facing my Pains
Replies: 115
Views: 15203

Re: Facing my Pains

I have one small complaint, you use "said" quite often, replacing it with "replied", "exclaimed", "questioned", "proclaimed", etc... will help mix up the variety a little bit. Also, when you put things like "Suzu said" (For example) in the middle of dialogue, even when they are still talking, it see...
by Roamin12
Tue May 29, 2012 9:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 87395

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives!

This looks somewhat promising, although having two disabled people as detectives has its drawbacks, especially since one is nearly blind even with glasses and the other could die at any moment. But I can forfeit realism for entertainment.
by Roamin12
Tue May 29, 2012 6:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 387265

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 5/29)

This chapter was amazing, I enjoyed it so much with the awkwardness and Mutou scene. My favourite one yet.
by Roamin12
Wed May 23, 2012 11:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Eternity Lost: A Poem dedicated to Lilly Satou
Replies: 9
Views: 1511

Re: Eternity Lost: A Poem dedicated to Lilly Satou

Beautiful... Not enough to make me cry, but definitely enough for the feels.
by Roamin12
Wed May 23, 2012 11:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Deus Ex: Katawa Revolution (Complete)
Replies: 63
Views: 8088

Re: Deus Ex: Katawa Revolution (Part 5 Posted)

The programers of DE probably had their reasons for introducing the drug - maybe as a plot element, maybe as a means of limiting the amounts of upgrades a player can get (Shadowrun uses a mechanic for this purpse), maybe both. Here's a spoiler warning for those who want to play Human Revolution. It...
by Roamin12
Wed May 23, 2012 9:12 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Did anyone else watch this?
Replies: 13
Views: 1309

Re: Did anyone else watch this?

I haven't seen it yet, although now it is on my radar and I'll probably give it a shot some other time. Personally I wouldn't watch a walk through of it until you finish the game, which I have. But then again the whole I found KS was from ChilledChaos's play through. (But I did play and 100% the gam...
by Roamin12
Wed May 23, 2012 9:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Apology to the Nurse
Replies: 10
Views: 1691

Re: An Apology to the Nurse

That was great. I had the biggest smile on my face when I saw that fan fiction of a fan fiction post. Hilarious.