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by The O.H.L.
Wed May 23, 2012 12:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 386371

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 5/22)

I love the way you are writing this. It's not often that I actually like a story from a girls perspective.
by The O.H.L.
Tue May 22, 2012 10:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 19
Views: 3127

Re: Blood Oath [Rika/Hisao] [Explicit content!]

At first I thought; sure why not, I didn't give Cutter a chance so let's have a go here. I'm damn glad I did. I think I'll go back and actually read Cutter past the first scene, I'm not as much of a whimp as I was a couple months ago. Storywise, this was an intriguing story. The way everybody is tal...
by The O.H.L.
Sun May 20, 2012 1:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
Replies: 169
Views: 58605

Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)

Never title your story "untitled" or "title to come later" or anything to that affect. All it does is send the reader the message that you either don't know or don't care enough about your own story to give it a name. If the writer doesn't care, why should the reader? You're pushing people away bef...
by The O.H.L.
Fri May 18, 2012 12:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 155851

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/15/2012 (mature content)

kuniqs wrote:Would Rika be more fit to worship Nurgle or Tzeench?
Oh no, let's try to keep this as far away from 40k as possible.
by The O.H.L.
Wed May 16, 2012 11:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 386371

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 5/16)

Hm, that was a nice read. I'm too tired to comment on it properly (it's 3am here), but I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when she wins the game of battleship, or if she will just procrastinate so she doesn't have to deal with any new situations.
by The O.H.L.
Wed May 16, 2012 10:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 155851

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/15/2012 (mature content)

It appears that Rika won't change. Coolio then.

Edit: Thanks for not going asshat Hisao on this branch or the other.
by The O.H.L.
Mon May 14, 2012 3:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 67
Views: 9225

Re: Doomish's Misha One-Shot Collection! [EXPLICIT~!] [5/13]

I have a big stupid grin on my face thanks to you. That was great.
by The O.H.L.
Sun May 13, 2012 11:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 205
Views: 67785

Re: Shower Scenes

That was glorious. Magnificent. Awesome. Just damn hilarious. I have a huge grin on my face. Funniest part for me was probably where Misha (I think) said "It's not polite to point". I had to stop reading for a short moment while I read that. I think there are just a few places where you forgot the t...
by The O.H.L.
Sat May 12, 2012 11:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end] [now with epilogue]
Replies: 56
Views: 7920

Re: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end]

Bad experiences produce nothing but knowledge of how to avoid more of them. We all have bad days, but I can say I haven't experienced anything as jarring as that. I hope you can deal with everything, I hope you learn from everything, I hope you keep up with the writing which I'm assuming is therapeu...
by The O.H.L.
Fri May 11, 2012 12:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 148
Views: 35717

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

You sure you want your steam name open to everyone?
by The O.H.L.
Wed May 09, 2012 7:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 35963

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC story) Chapter 6 now up

Very enjoyable read.

By the way you have the same simile twice fairly quickly. It's the one about brushing your teeth and drinking orange juice. It doesn't detract from the story, it just reads weirdly in my opinion.
by The O.H.L.
Wed May 09, 2012 6:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 79
Views: 8993

Re: The Angel of Death [Iwanako] [Updated 5/8]

Yay, I need something to counter the boring-ness of To Kill a Mockingbird. God I hate English classes. How far into the book are you? I wouldn't call To Kill a Mockingbird boring, but that's just my opinion. I thought it was a pretty good book, but then again English classes tend to make you sick o...
by The O.H.L.
Tue May 08, 2012 11:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 79
Views: 8993

Re: The Angel of Death [Iwanako] [Updated 5/8]

Yay, I need something to counter the boring-ness of To Kill a Mockingbird. God I hate English classes.
by The O.H.L.
Tue May 08, 2012 7:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Free Radicals - A Miki Story (Last Update: 5/9/12)
Replies: 12
Views: 1919

Re: To be titled Miki story

I don't think the VN ever specifies how long Miki has been going to Yamaku. So far, neither does this fanfic. It says that Miki will be attending her first year at Yamaku, which implies, key word here is implies, that she has lost her hand. And what Roamin said was true. Also I think she states she...
by The O.H.L.
Tue May 08, 2012 6:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 155851

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/7/2012 (mature content)

Please with the story paths, don't take them to the extreme like the game does. It would ruin the story for me.
Please just don't make him go uber aggressively towards the other character.