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by Vekter
Fri Apr 13, 2012 1:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12584

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [UPDATED 4/13]

CRAPPY UPDATE SCHEDULE, HO! Part 3 only because it's balls long, enjoy, thanks to Slartibartfast on Steam for the proofread, R&R and tell me if anything sounds stupid. ----- Part 3: Shock & Awe “Are we there yet, man?” I sighed loudly, still leading Kenji down the street to the park near Yamaku. Tha...
by Vekter
Mon Apr 09, 2012 1:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12584

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [Mild erotica]

Scissorlips wrote:
Vekter wrote:I just got back from a convention; I'll do some work on it tomorrow and hopefully have the next part up very soon.
PAX or Sakuracon? o:
Neither! Middle Tennessee Anime Convention.
by Vekter
Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12584

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [Mild erotica]

Nakasaro-San wrote:Is this thread dead? I really loved the story, but I'm starting to wonder when more will come...






Woe is me.
Nah, it's not dead.

I just got back from a convention; I'll do some work on it tomorrow and hopefully have the next part up very soon.
by Vekter
Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 165701

Re: Rika Story - updated 4/2/2012

Another EXCELLENT chapter. Keep them coming, bro.
by Vekter
Mon Mar 26, 2012 1:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 165701

Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012

I've gone through this, reread it over and over again, and I can easily say that you're a master at this. Also, I hate fanfiction. But this made me ignore that fact so quickly, that I relinquished that hate very quickly. Still hate crossfics though. EDIT: Being the jolly good newbie I am, I don't k...
by Vekter
Sat Mar 24, 2012 2:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 165701

Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012

Damn it, you... you keep bein' awesome, Rikabro. I can't say anything past that; it's fantastic.
by Vekter
Fri Mar 23, 2012 9:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12584

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [Mild erotica]

Vekter - curse you and your avatar for making me picture the Yuuko Daki as she rolled around in her bed. Your scene was unintentionally erotic. That said, I love the abrupt transition between parts 1 and 2. Straight from delicate, pining Yuuko to insane, insane Kenji. Really builds a beautiful cont...
by Vekter
Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12584

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [Mild erotica]

Title suggested 'war', but I'm guessing this meant something else. 'Thousand Yard Stare' depicts the 'eyes' most soldiers had when he/she experienced the horrors of war--though it translates to something else in this regard. 'Appeasement' is the move made by Neville Chamberlain to appease German Ch...
by Vekter
Wed Mar 21, 2012 12:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12584

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [Mild erotica]

Not a bad start. The transition in point of view between the two parts isn't bad, though it threw me off for a moment. I have no idea where the story is going, so I can't say for sure, but a Yuuko perspective might have worked for consistency's sake. That's just a nitpick though. Things seemed to m...
by Vekter
Wed Mar 21, 2012 4:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12584

Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]

Hey guys! Here's my first KS fic. I hope you guys enjoy it. I'll try to complete Parts 3 and 4 soon(tm). Read, review, etc. please! (Think of each part as a scene. Also, erotica will be in later parts and I'll write it so you can skip it if you don't like that kind of thing.) EDIT 6/26: I've proven ...
by Vekter
Thu Mar 15, 2012 9:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 165701

Re: Rika Story - updated 3/14/2012 - mild erotica warning

Keep being awesome, Rikabro.
by Vekter
Fri Mar 09, 2012 11:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 165701

Re: Rika Story (mild erotica warning) updated 3/9/2012

Good stuff man, good stuff. Can't wait to see some more.