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by Vekter
Tue Jul 17, 2012 4:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
Replies: 145
Views: 46115

Re: Miki Route (updated 7/17)

That was too adorable. Can't wait to see the next part!
by Vekter
Mon Jul 09, 2012 12:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12582

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [UPDATED 6/26]

It lives! Good to see you update. I think you did a really good job with Yuuko's narrative, although I do agree that you could have stood to slow down a little more and go into further detail about them going around the carnival, give Takashi's cameo a little more purpose, things like that. I enjoy...
by Vekter
Tue Jun 26, 2012 6:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12582

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [UPDATED 6/26]

I like it. I'm playing back through Shizune's route currently, and it contains the most indicators about Kenji and Yukko's relationship - not the least of which occurs when Misha and Yukko come back to the library and Kenji immediately dives for cover . I think you could probably spend a little mor...
by Vekter
Tue Jun 26, 2012 5:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12582

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [UPDATED 5/8]

Loving this, so much! :D http://30.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_kpox5qHMDM1qzma4ho1_500.jpg I can't ignore his girth. >2012 >Vekter >Writing I wish you guys would add me on Steam and bitch at me when I'm playing GTA4 and Binding of Isaac instead of reading. I have the shortest attention span ever. D: Oh...
by Vekter
Fri May 25, 2012 6:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12582

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [UPDATED 5/8]

Dr. Robotnik wrote:Try rereading this and imagine Kenji having the Soldier's voice. Fuckin' lol. Also nice fic, I like it.
I kind of imagined Kenji as a cross between the Soldier, Dale Gribble, and the nicest guy you'll ever meet.
by Vekter
Fri May 11, 2012 11:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end] [now with epilogue]
Replies: 56
Views: 8730

Re: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end]

Fuck.

Good story. I feel like Hisao kind of deserved it in a really fucked-up, cosmic way, but no one should have to go through that. Ever.
by Vekter
Wed May 09, 2012 12:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: second game
Replies: 7
Views: 1215

Re: second game

No writing in script, please work on your grammar, always have a proofreader, read some other fics before trying again buddy.
by Vekter
Tue May 08, 2012 2:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12582

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [UPDATED 4/13]

Dippeggs wrote:
Vekter wrote: “... Wait, if she's deaf, then why does she wear glasses?”
Did you get this from the "GIMME THE CHOCOLATE HISAO" Comic?
Yes. Yes, I did.
by Vekter
Tue May 08, 2012 1:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12582

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [UPDATED 4/13]

Hey, would ya look at that, I ACTUALLY DELIVER ON A DEADLINE. Short chapter, but the next one's gonna be balls long, so I think it evens it out. As always, read and review please! ----- Part 4: Drawing Treaties Purse, phone, keys, wallet, money. “Okay, I've got everything,” I mutter to myself as I c...
by Vekter
Sun May 06, 2012 4:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12582

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [UPDATED 4/13]

WOO, I'VE BEEN DRAGGING MY ASS AGAIN BECAUSE I DON'T KNOW STATUS UPDATE then. I've started writing Part 4, and should have it done some time between this week and next fucking month ( no I'm kidding here in the next week ) You guys are welcome to add me on Steam and bitch at me to write every so of...
by Vekter
Sun May 06, 2012 4:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12582

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [UPDATED 4/13]

WOO, I'VE BEEN DRAGGING MY ASS AGAIN BECAUSE I DON'T KNOW STATUS UPDATE then. I've started writing Part 4, and should have it done some time between this week and next fucking month ( no I'm kidding here in the next week ) You guys are welcome to add me on Steam and bitch at me to write every so oft...
by Vekter
Sun May 06, 2012 4:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 67
Views: 10261

Re: Doomish's Misha One-Shot Collection! [EXPLICIT~!] [5/5]

Doomish, mah bro. Glad to see something upbeat from you for once! Strangely enough, I never actually considered that her persona as Misha wasn't her real personality . Naturally, I saw it as some kind of coping mechanism, but I never really looked any further into it than that. Very well written as ...
by Vekter
Wed May 02, 2012 2:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 165698

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/1/2012 (mature content)

Good stuff, as always. Takashi can suck a dick.
by Vekter
Fri Apr 13, 2012 1:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12582

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [UPDATED 4/13]

Sorry for the double-post, but I've updated it once again. I think it's good how it is now, but let me know if there's anything glaringly obvious that's wrong with it.
by Vekter
Fri Apr 13, 2012 2:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 12582

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [UPDATED 4/13]

The scarf was a nice touch. Otherwise it felt a bit too rushed. Agreed. I'm spacing it out a bit. Give me a minute to update. I'll probably screw around with it a bit tomorrow too. EDIT: Okay, I made her reaction a bit more realistic. I'll think of ways to space it out, but the whole conversation s...