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You're not really off to that great of a start. Molly feels rather generic and the reasons Hisao has for even interacting with her amount to “all the interesting character were doing something else.” No, not entirely. You don't even have to show the reader anything about her character quirks in the ...

Getting away from tanks and online games and back to stuff that could used in the actual game... The Sexy Schoolgirl Expansion pack doesn't affect the dialoge or plot any, but all female character sprites are redone to have tighter and skimpier clothing. Hanako will probabaly have a body stocking or...

In-depth character customization - Lovingly craft your own cripple child from an incredibly in-depth character creator. Choose from and edit several pre-made models or dig into the custom mode to sculpt every detail of your precious OC, right down to their disability and personality! If I were goin...

Chapter 15 Wake up. Panic. Realize I'm one eye less than I used to be. If this wasn't so horrific, it would really be getting old. I'm otherwise surprisingly refreshed. Given how the rest of the school gets under my skin, I'd expect to toss and turn all night but I don't. I might actually sleep bett...

TheHivemind wrote:THE SPECTER OF THE PAST RETURNS TO HAUNT ME.

If that's the worst anybody can blame you for, you're still doing better than quite a few of your compatriots.

But when Hisao visits Shizune's home, she rarely discuss about her mother and covers mostly about her father and brother which--to me--strikes me pretty odd. She doesn't discuss her father or brother until you meet them either and avoids mentioning Lilly is related to her until she doesn't have any...

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Oddball wrote: ... because I made the wrong layer invisible and can't go back and change it now.

Of course, this adds to the hilarity -- Mutou giving that "advice" to Yuuko...

... that works too.

It bothers me less that you drew this and more that you consider it a favorite.

That just tells me things about you that I'd rather not know.

Having set down and read all of this story in one straight go (including rereading the few earlier chapters) I have to say that this is probaably by far my favorite original character I've read about. Great job. Any complaints I had would just be nitpicking.

Only the condition. Stiles had it REAL bad, though, his legs were so malformed that he couldn't walk properly. Also, Isamu's not an angry, murderous lobster. He's nice enough.....usually. Although he's not above beating somebody, taking pictures of it, and blackmailing them with it, I see. I'm kind...

The sad ending is nice. I have no problems with that. The alternate crazy ending was fun but I think it would have worked just fine without the axe murder. It was already nuts enough without that part. The main story … well, that's certainly a different take on Naomi than I'm used to seeing. She com...

Color me intrigued. (Of course you'll have to talk to Rin to figure out exactly what color that would be.)

Very nice twist on an old formula and i's always nice to see some of the lesser characters get a bit of love.

It's always fun going back and reading the old stories just to see how different they are than what we actually ended up with. I think Emi being a lesbian was a bit to convenient and Shizune changed her ways a touch too easily but otherwise it was a fun little romp. I also want to congratulate you o...

While much is made of Mutou's rambling dull way of teaching, he's actually a very effective teacher in an odd somewhat unintentional way. While most of his students don't get half of what he says, he's actually teaching them several levels above their grade. Not intentionally, he just tends to rambl...

As a general rule, I have a strong dislike for new students being placed in Mutou's class. Granted, you didn't copy all the stuff from Hisao's introduction about meeting him in the lobby, having to work with Misha and Shizune, and all that, but I'm not seeing anything you've done with it that's real...