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That second one is actually really good.

Soon-hee Kim is descended from Korean war laborers and was the sex slave of a gang of thugs for four years before a Predator wiped them out and she survived the crossfire by hiding in a closet and was pseudo-adopted by Kenji. It's probably best that you don't mention most of this in the mainstory i...

Saki meets Rika Rika sat there at the bus stop. She was still new to the school and the area so she wasn't sure when the bus actually arrived. Really, she didn't care, as long as she arrived at the city sometime that day. To pass the time she watched a particularity large insert scurry around on th...

I thought you were being serious about it at first (yes, I fell for Hachisame's trick :roll: ). Nice job making her condition more plausible by first pulling out something completely outlandish. After the Innsmouth reference I was relieved you didn't take the story in that direction :-) It lessened...

I've seen a lot of stories that have groups of characters like, Taro, Naomi, Miki, Suzu, Molly, etc etc all hanging out together. There's nothing technically wrong with this, but it does strike me as odd that all these friends are all in the same class. There's never any other character from another...

Stop reading this post. You want the post before this one. It's the one that has the story in it. This is just some rambling author's notes. … Okay, did you read the story first? Good. Now we can continue. Please, step into the mind of the author for just a little bit. (wipe your feet first.) Sigh *...

Chapter 17 Hachisame and I both look towards Time Warp who shows no signs of having heard whats going on, which is normal for her, but it goes on for longer than usual. “There's goes my dramatic moment,” Hachisame sighs. “Why are we locking the door anyway?” I ask. “Oh, you wanted me to lock the doo...

Give Shizune a few more years and contact lenses and she could easily pass for Elisabeth Blanctorche from King of Fighters.
She probably already owns the outfits

I was worried about this one at first. I started out kinda shakey with the seemingly inconsistent amnesia and the fact that nobody seemed to know each other despite having gone to school together for years. I think you've manged to turn it around and make it work though. I'm actually quite curious a...

Time to drag this thing back out again. I actually remember starting to read this at some point, but then I stopped and I don't remember why. Mirage has gotten better as a writer since then, but this is still a delightful little romp. Early chapters seemed a bit rushed and crowded. Finding out Misha...

At some point in a story, you're probably going to have some super minor character appear. A doctor, a bus driver, a cashier, a pro-wrestler (don't look at me, it's your story), or anything like that that doesn't even rate a name. They'll show up, they'll say their one line, and in a sentence or two...

I think there *is* something to the initial premise of this thread (ie, Shizune being disliked more because of Misha's existence as a character making it easy to compare the two to one another). If anything, I think Misha makes Shizune MORE tolerable. As bad as she can come across in the game, just...

I really liked the Misha/Shizune switch. I just wished it was longer. I'd really like to see more of that dynamic.