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In a world quite different than our own ....

So I tried to do a quick picture of Suzu's sister from the semi-official non-canon Miki route. I didn't see any mention of hair color (I might have missed it) so I went with giving her similar hair color to Suzu. I'm not sure if I like that idea or not though. maybe I should have went with a darker ...

That's awesome.

Like others have said, it was dark, but it was believably dark. It felt like something that could have actually happened, unlike a lot of 'dark” works that feel the need to just pile on things until they're unbelievable.

I'm going to rip into this one a bit. Nothing personal. Your story seems to have taken a long time to get to the title character which is an odd choice. It's not hard to include a new character in your story. You just have to have them actually MEET the main character. Characters can meet anywhere, ...

There's a chance that this is more my problem than that of the writers and it's not something I see very often, still, I think it's worth mentioning. I'm not good with Japanese names. I'm going to go out on a limb here and say that I'm not the only one that's bad with them. In fact, I know some writ...

At her last school, the girl Misha confessed to didn't just turn her down. She actively humiliated her in front of the whole class.

If you're having trouble writing a character when you first start out, try writing a full history for them. Example: I'm currently working on a new project and struggled to get a solid grasp on what kind of character I want the romantic focus to be, so I've made a new document with details from the...

This isn't going to be whips and chains,

Good.

Those aren't kinky enough anyway.

I kinda thought the first one looked like something out of a horror manga myself, but I felt it was worth sharing.

Numb wrote:

Oddball wrote:Natsume only wears socks when she sleeps. It's not a sexual thing, it's just how she's most comfortable. Also her feet get cold easily.

Not sure if this means sleeping nude with socks on or not wearing socks during the day. Both are interesting ideas though.

Naked except for socks.