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This is a bit hard to read as it is. Go back to everyplace you hit enter to start a new line and hit enter again. Give some space between lines. Otherwise it blends together.

Just felt like sharing a few things about this story. Let's look behind the scenes. While it might look like I put no thought into anything here and that I included every idea I had, neither is true. I actually did quite a bit of editing on this (although this is the only time I've ever edited a sto...

Not bad. I think it's missing a bit of a character beat with Misha though. Hisao blames himself and Misha immedialty says that yeah, he's stupid and it probably was his fault. The scene doesn't quite feel right to me, as it is. It seems to me that Misha's first reaction would be more like “Really? H...

Texaboose wrote:Huh. Wow. Um. Yeah. So....

Loved the first chapter, then the shark jumping went crazy. The thing is, not sure if that was intentional. Much confuse.

It was all intentional. All of it.

I'm going to go ahead and post the last chapter now. Whether the topic gets deleted or locked afterwards, I at least want to say that it's done. Thanks for putting up with my craziness. I promise not to do this sort of thing again. --------- Last Chapter I knock on the door. Answering the door is a ...

I would like to take a moment to thank the numerous people that have contributed fan art to this story. I would like to, but nobody has done any. Jerks. We return to Chapter 4 already in progress. “--her name is Hanako. She's got purple hair and was in a fire when she was little. I'm her long lost b...

Mirage_GSM wrote:This story should be linked to in the Tips for Fanfction Writers thread.
A lot of writers could learn a thing or three about narration from this...

By all means, link it. I would myself, but I'm not quite sure what description I'd use for it.

Gotta Knock a Little Harder from the Cowboy Bebop soundtrack fits surprising well.

Chapter 3 “Thank god that's over. I thought we'd never get out of there,” Ryouko said. “I'm surprised we did,” I said back. “That was just … horrible,” I add with a shudder. “Who knew so many people here at Yamaku had connections to the Yakuza?” Molly said. “And what was up with that crazy Yakazu d...

CHAPTER 2 I apologize to all my faithful readers, but chapter 2 has been taken down. I was really unhappy with the way that it turned out and I may end up re-writing it in the future. I'm sorry for anyone that was looking forward to seeing the continuation of the story. I did have a character profi...

...Christ. Hikage ? :shock: Where did you dig that up, I'm fairly sure it's something even deader than Misha route ever was. Found her while going through the shimmie. One picture in black and white that is said to actually be in color That is all I know about whoever she is and what she was suppos...

Let me help you out on a few of the cast

Hikage
Ryouko
Sayuri
Monoko
Thisbe (which I spelled Thisby in this story and didn't notice until now.)
Marika Etou the purple haired wheelchair girl

This story get a whole stack of Get-Out-Of-Jail-Free-Cards for incorrect tenses and PoV inconsistencies :-) It'll get worse. :twisted: Too bad there are so many characters I don't remember ever reading about. While, I haven't made up a single character here, I'm pretty sure that some of these have ...

(Author's note: Seriously, guys. No offense meant. You know I love you all.) The Tragic Tale of Hanako Chapter 1: The Beginning Iwanako sat there in class. She was early, but there were already a few student there before her. It really didn't matter much though. Even when the class was full, she sti...

According to the cardback for her original action figure , Baroness from G.I. Joe (who, it should be noted, has long dark hair) once suffered extensive burns. Granted, it doesn't say the burns were to the right side of her body and face, but it doesn't say they weren't ... Baroness does eventually ...