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One of these days I'd really like to get out there and attend one of these things.

I love your characterization of Miki here and how she helps out and encourages the track team is an angle I don't think I've seen before. The other track team members seem pretty well done too. It does feel that Hanako has been abandoned a bit too easily though, and I'm surprised there hasn't been m...

I've read various ghosts stories here before, but this one might just be my favorite. One thing I really enjoy is how Hisao doesn't just immediately start haunting the place. It takes him nearly a decade before anything happens. In that way, you manage to isolate the character from any of the cast t...

It's a shame this never got continued. It started off really strong with lots of interesting material to work with.

This is a good story. Molly comes across as very adorable adn Taro is likewise a strong character. Suzu tends to be a bit more inconsistent. Sometimes she's a good friend with just some bad manners or habits sometimes she seems to crank it up to megabitch. It's hard to feel like she's a good person ...

https://m.imgur.com/gallery/WNzEkwP This is Aki, one of my OC's in Fading Memories. My art style is simple and sketchy, but hope you like it! And I am taking these pics om a mobile phone till my computer is back. The image isn't showing, but I copied the link and went to check it out. It's pretty c...

You can do that, or you can hit the upload attachment tab in post reply.

I'd suggest writting them in some form of text or word document on your computer so you can save every once in a while. Then post when you're done.

I started writing this out as a comment to another story, but decided it worked as a general thing. Doing those, "everybody gets back together years later" stories is hard. Real hard. If you're going to do it you can't expect everybody to have gotten the happy ending. Not everyone is successful. Shi...

You tried and you've learned something from it.

I expect your next work to be even better for the lessons you've learned.

It might not be great either, but you'll get there.

I'm with Mirage on this one. This ... this isn't working. Those usernames were especially bad. Edit: I suppose this deserves a more in depth response than this. Give me a little bit. Hana and Lilly have already helped prepare it. Personal pet peeve, although this is only a tiny nitpick. Calling Hana...

I loved how you handled the relationship (even if Emi did seem to overreact a few times). It was nice, energetic, playful, and cute. The best parts of the story are when you're just focusing on the two of them being a couple. Iwanako though, she seemed to come out of nowhere, which I suppose isn't b...

I suppose I could tell you how I meant for Rin's memory problems to come across, but frankly, your interpretations are just as good as anything I could tell you. Heck, it might even make more sense to you than if I tried to explain it. Honestly, I just liked the idea of taking Rin AWAY from a painti...

Yeah, the whole thing feels like it's building up to some great conflict or revelation and it never actually comes.

Likewise the characters and even time of year feel dramatically different between writers. It makes it harder to get into the story.