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Never saw Hanako's bad end. I wont. One of my good friends who also played through KS, did so in its entirety. He said to stay away from her bad ending as its just too heart wrenching. Im inclined to believe him. You should watch it. It shows you a side of Hanako you'll never otherwise see. Honestl...

So far Rin's mom and Yumi both feel rather interesting.

You've also done a good job with Rin without making her feel too abstract and weird. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

The Sailor Moon one is adorable.

Pretty good so far. Although it seems the plot points and characters are a bit disconnected at times. This may simply because you're still setting things up. There's also a few times when Emi comes off as being a tad cruel. Otherwise, it seems rather interesting. The meditating scene feels like some...

That is awesome!

It's not explicitly stated he's been off his pills for weeks. The most I offered as to his rate of taking them is "There are still 2 days’ worth of pills inside [a case packed for 3 days' worth]." If it's ambiguous, I can fix it. I get what you're saying there, but this part I read differently. I’d...

The first chapter did take me a while to figure out there were two different characters narrating. While it wouldn't hurt to differentiate the two a little better, some simple name dropping or medical details early on would also help solve the problem. Have Hisao mention his heart or pills early on....

If you want to rewrite it, go for it. I suggest you slowing things down and expanding upon your ideas a bit though.

I do remember that story, but I have no idea what it was called.

And if we're to trust Mirage and say it wasn't here, then it must have been on pastebin. I haven't read KS fic anywhere else.

I like to think that Lilly avoids reading horror stories. That make her jumpy and she has difficulty sleeping after reading them.

I like to imagine Rin wandering around a store with Emi and arbitrarily buying a lot of random clothes that don't match. Like she would dress like an absolute clown if there wasn't somebody there to veto her bad decisions. Like... I can see her buying light-up tennis shoes. I can see that. I'm not ...

All girls like shopping. I think that's a scientific fact. Even Hanako seemed eager to do some shopping. With shopping comes buying clothes. So, what kinds of things do they look for? Where do they go? Here's me putting entirely too much thought put into the subject. Lilly: Lilly is entirely at the ...

Adorable.

I have decided that Nurse speaks like Alan Alda from M*A*S*H*.