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More games could use a blind princess. The idea just seems to work to me.
and Merry Christmas

Setzuko is not a name. Setsuko is, though not really a common one. Is there a reason your characters are carbon copies of those in the VN? Since you said you didn't know where this story is supposed to go yourself I somehow doubt it... I'm trying to develop their character, but stress and other fac...

Hisao is still deeper and better written than 99% of visual novel protagonists.

The zombie part lacked the mood and atmosphere you really need to pull off effective horror. I think you also try to work too much into too small a space and not everything gets the details it needs. The twist that it was just a game is actually a decent one, but then that raises some issues with th...

Have some Emi

emmjay wrote:

QuietlySomething wrote:Professor X! Oracle!

Damn, I'm a nerd.

On the subject of comic book characters, Deadpool may not be disabled, but he is certainly disfigured.

That and he has what should be fatal cancer.

Ad me to the "not going to download this" gang. If you want me to read it, don't make me go through extra steps.

Forgot to mention that part. I wouldn't interpret too much into that. For me it was more a storytelling neccessity than characterdevelopment on the part of Hanako. To tell Lilly's story, Hanako's problems had to be taken out of the equation or it would have taken too much time to tell that story an...

One interesting thing is that in this route we see Hanako actually thrive and grow out of her shell more than we do in her own route - find a new friend, work with the school newspaper, plan an excursion. To an extent it makes sense chronologically (Lilly route takes you further along through the s...

I found this in a game called Harem Collector.

Toothless wrote:I would like to think the pic with Hanako has a cake in front of her saying; Happy birthday Hisao!

The question is then is this a gift from Hanako or is she just the gift?

It's kinda obvious English isn't your first language. You might want to get somebody to help you out and proof read your story before posting it. Your grammar is all over the place. One thing in particular that stood out is your tendency not to capitalize sentences. the story itself seems like it co...

Nurse threatening somebody feels out of character no matter how you slice it.

Granted, he does it a few times in the game, but it's always obvious that he's joking and he only does it after Hisao has gotten used to him and on friendly terms.