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monkeywitha6pack wrote: ↑

Thu Jan 18, 2018 11:04 am

Sorry, I mentally swaped the two names for some reason

I saw that, but I felt bad about saying anything.

Oddly enough, my first draft of this story didn't mention the girls name at all. Not on purpose. I just didn't notice I never named her.

Just Live Midnight has come and gone. Saki and I are laying undressed on her floor on sheets and blankets we've pulled from her bed and spread out. She claims that sometimes going from the softer mattress to the harder floor helps when she has trouble sleeping. I suppose it's an acquired taste. It'...

It strikes me as more odd that Hisao and Lilly seem to be in the same class for PE than anything else. Personally, I love going back and looking at the really old stuff. You get a sense of what the story could have been and how things have changed. I remember Lilly being really into music in some of...

Yeah. I think that conversation isn't something you should skip. It feels too important.

Also, I think they both get a bit too technical defining their disabilities.

This last update in this topic was July so I'm taking over now. Consider this a mutiny. Pirate Emi red.png We will now all read ... Some Lilly Scene by Lulz a very VERY early story back from the days when there wasn't so much "fanfic" as there was "story pitches." So... go read it now. Then come bac...

The time jump was exceptionally jarring. It really needed something to set it up. As for the story, not bad. I liked the school parts better than the years later stuff, but I find I usually do in KS fics. I think there probably should have been a stronger tie between the old and present day stuff as...

Kinda sucks if some people aren't getting their stories. Maybe we should ask for anyone whop wants to volunteer to finish them off.

It's a little bit after Christmas at this point.

I think we're still missing a few.

No interested in a spring themed contest, but by all means, keep us updated when they do new stuff.

Very well done. Emi came off perfectly, and I thought the characterization on Nurse was much stronger and well written than he normally gets.

If the entire thing was a dream so far... well, it's an original start. There's not enough of it to really have that much of an opinion yet.

The alternate universe thing was an odd choice, but the story itself worked. I'm curious as to how Hanako and Hisao's relationship has worked so far if he doesn't know her past though.

It's good to know that your're alive and doing fine still.

Don't blame me, blame StilesLong. (Prompt: Give one of the KS girls a surprise Christmas present: a puppy! You pick the breed, the sender, etc BUT they must receive the puppy while on campus. Oh, and Yamaku doesn't allow non-service animals. Oh, and whoever gifted the dog didn't include food. And th...