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The fact that he's mysteriously "messed up" and can't even understand nonverbal cues like flinching and literally reluctance is also indefensible. This is Hanako. Do you know who Hanako is? Are you familiar with how she acts? Flinching and reluctance is how she responds to everything. Also, it seem...

The banter between Emi and Miki was very fluid and well-done. I'm still not entirely sure whether their characterizations were on point or not - it sort of felt like they weren't, but I think your writing was good enough to convince me otherwise. I think what might be throwing you is that you hardl...

Hold up. I'll fix that one.

Vote here for too much! Why are we being warned? Is a new fic really that dangerous?

I can think of a few stories that I should probably put a warning on before anyone tries to read them.

Not this one though. This one is nice. Not exactly canon, but effective.

Is this too much? I think it might be too much.



Next up ...
Birthday by Nevice (or "Birthday" Hanako fan fiction by Nevice if you want to be one of those people.

This is the one and only post Nevice made on the forum... whoever they are.

However, I do think that the actual plot of it, how each of the ladies reacted, is a bit much. For the most part Hisao is just a guy who they know of in Act One. They're friendly with him and willing to extend a hand to help him out, sure, but they're still just acquaintances. I would expect this k...

Honestly, I don't know either of them.

But we always have this
Helen Takahara la Guido from Helen ESP would fit right in with the cast as well.

I used to date a girl with burns scars over the majority of her body. Does that count for anything?

The story was a quick gut punch to me. It was short but it hurt. Not a lot of substance there, but it did it's job. I really would have liked to see a follow up on it or a second chapter just to see the idea given the room to breathe that it deserved. ... So, the next story we've got up on our book ...

Honest to god, I did like an half an hour of research to see if that detail would make sense. BUT IT DOES. SO I'M FINE. Fanfiction writers' OCD kicks in again! Don't worry - it happens to all of us :lol: (You should see all the notes I made when writing 'Tripping') I found a forum for people that h...

I loved the characterization in the Misha/Lilly story. it was just full of energy and a lot of fun.

Last week we went old. This week we'll go with something more more recent... if you consider October 2016 more recent.

What happened? - Shizune sad ending by danbuter

I'll let you keep up with the records for now. You can be secretary of the club. :wink: Now we have two official titles. It's almost like a real club now. Also, if anybody is curious how I pick stories, i use a random number generator to give me a page, choose three or four titles that catch my atte...

Before I continue, let me toss out a few questions and gets some feedback. On update frequency, i was thinking a week for any one-shot story, 2 weeks for anything 5 chapters or shorter (give or take) and if we ever do one of those mega huge long stories, at least a month for the main story, while we...