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Pretty good so far. It's refreshing seeing a Takashi that isn't a total jerk, just somewhat stand-off-ish. The Molly/Emi rivalry has quite some potential as well and you've made me quite curious about Molly's brother (and her family in general.) One minor complain I had. One chapter you had all the ...

The story's goal seems to be to get to two girls in their underwear as fast as possible...

Not necessarily a bad goal...

I probably let that one go longer than i should have. Now that i think about it, there really isn't much to say about the story. So to make up for that, let's do a quick short one.


The Escape by Moekki ... sort of.

Rin would probabaly have some issues getting those things on. They might be more trouble than they're worth to her.

On that note, what do you think Rin wears on her feets when it's cold?

I'm kind of thinking those fur lined boots that are easily slipped off.

Now that I think about it, Hisao needs two voices. His actual spoken voice and his narration voice.

I'm kind of curious what a creepy pasta for this would even look like?

One of those "I can't delete the game and it's doing weird things?" types? The "too realistic blood and gore for it's style" stuff? I played it then I woke up disabled?

This is wonderful little story. if I have any complaint, it's that it's too short. I would have loved to see more of this. There's just so much personality you've packed in such a small space.

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Wed Mar 14, 2018 4:51 pm

Is this dead? When was the last update? The last message on twitter is from 2013

I feel safe in saying that it's long dead.

For a while it was acting up and only working sometimes, but now it seems like it's completley gone.

And now it's time for something completely different. https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png I thought it was about time we started looking at longer works here. Not all the time, but I wanted the option to be available ... and WHAT a longer story we have here. Madame Lillian's Specialty Service by kosherb...

I noticed your story had been going on for a long time and yet nobody ever seemed to reply or comment on it so I decided I'd read through it and tell you what I thought. I feel everybody deserves some comments. So I sat down and over the course of a month, maybe two, I read your story from start unt...

(I think I'll stick with the big logo.)

Now we're going to read ... The Diary of Tezuka Rin...or Rin Tezuka by dewelar

In case you didn't notice, it's a Rin story. Those are often interesting.

You could even tell me you DIDN'T like what I've written. At least I know somebody read it.