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Emps, I hope I didn't come off as insulting to you. I mean no disrespect. It's wonderful that you put in effort to write this. it just needs some more work. Having said that, please put it back up. I hate when writers torch their own work. Leave it for posterity and start a new topic. Also, that wil...

I thought these tips were obvious, but after reading a few stories lately, I want to make sure they're mentioned and hopefully seen by people. The cast should have a reason they want to hang around your main character. There should be something there they should actually like. Likewise, whoever your...

The idea for Angus came about when some anon started posting about how the real reason Lilly left Hisao was her Scottish boyfriend, "Angus" (we now suspect this anon to be a cuckold fetishist). This is a HORRIBLE way to introduce your story. You almost lost me before it even started. Eventually, I ...

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png Next up is ... Two Sides Of The Same Coin by Fergard Stratoavis. It's by a non-native english speaker and the language feels awkward at times, as does the formatting. The lead is also a bit of a Mary Sue, which the writer admits, and the story itself is one of the ma...

Nothing wrong with the occasional shameless bit of smut.

For what it was, it was pretty well done.

I never started running (but I never said I was going to either) but I do take better care of myself these days.

Well, I certainly didn't see that coming.

I've seen so much of the old characterization, I think that's just automatically where my mind goes now.

It seems this user joined, posted for a month, then disappeared. Which is a shame because I really like this version of Rika. She far more confused and conflicted than the typical self-destructive or dark one you usually see people write. I also find her relationships with the other characters inter...

That's just lovely.

Mirage_GSM wrote: ↑

Tue Apr 03, 2018 8:14 am

Well... It might have helpt to know what this is supposed to be a crossover OF...
As is for me it's just a bunch of characters I don't know doing random stuff.

DDLC. Doki Doki Literature Club! (Their exclamation point, not mine.) I haven't played it myself, but I'm aware of it.

Not bad.

The story seemed to not be sure of it's own tone a time or two, but otherwise it felt rather cute.

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png Okay. Now let's read .... Avici by Beoran . It's another short one, but good. I still go by what I said in the topic before. It's a bit melodramatic, and feels a touch too angsty, which I admit does sound weird considering the story is set in hell. I do wish we had g...

I don't know either of them. I only know what the game tells me.