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https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png Lost Opportunities by Silentcook. Yup. You saw the author's name right. This one here is written by our very own SilentCook. Here he wave a nice charming story told from Nurse's point of view. There's some light romance between Nurse and Meiko, a little bit more than...

I'm for letting it go. I think KS works best without voices.

Hanako Fancopter wrote: ↑

Sat Jun 02, 2018 1:36 am

So you guys read a fan fic every week or some such? You mind if I uhhhhhhh

Join in?

"Or such," is a good way of putting it, yes.

Yeah, just whenever you feel like chiming in on the current discussion, do so.

...but Akira scheduling a follow up does set it on that track. Well, at least it IS scheduled and not coincidential - half a dozen times :-) :lol: Oh, I'll definitely give it the points it deserves there. That other Akira route that shall remain nameless couldn't have been more forced if it tried.

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png The Ties that bind by hatori1181. Now we look at an unfinished story, the author said the next chapter would wrap things up but never wrote it. This is a Hisao/Lilly story that focuses on something we don't often see in these stories. Also it was written prior to the...

I'm ready to become depressed: who would actually prefer bad stories over good ones? Yes subjectivity, one man's trash, yadda yadda etcetera, but still. Maybe it's not so much a preference for bad stories over good, but a preference for talking about bad stories. (Some people prefer trashing bad th...

I'd like to get some more interaction here. Before I post the next story, what kind of story do you WANT to talk about?

Short or long?
OC based or main character based?
A Good story or a bad one?
Finished or unfinished?
Standard slice or life? Romance? Humor?

You put a lot of hardwork and effort into this.

But you don't start with Hisao's heart attack, so I'm going to dock points. No perfect score for you.

I don't mind the characterization so much. Hisao was pretty bad off when he started at Yamaku and he doesn't seem to have done anything to make himself more wanted, but what throws me is how he acts like he's so tired of the same old routine when he hasn't even been there long enough for their to ha...

Also, from my read of the character, a proper depiction of Hanako's inner monologue should be suspicious, cynical, and probably darkly sarcastic. Her response to someone like this guy should be "what's his angle?" not "what is this strange desire stirring within my loins?" Having Hanako think posit...

I pull on my sick ass sweater vest. I look at myself in Emi's mirror while she gets ready. Man, I look freaking sweet, I love this sweater. I would horsewhip you if I had a horse. This is not Hisao. This is Running-Joke Man. Hisao does not talk or think like that and the emphasis on the sweatervest...

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png Scar Crossed Lovers by MutilatedManequin. This is not one of our good stories. It's not one of the horrible ones either. It's just kinda there. I think we need to talk about those too sometimes. Here's a story about an American Transfer student that other than loving...

Not sure if you're still around anymore, but if you are, I really do hope you get back to this. Wonderful start. I really hope we haven't seen the last of his old friends either. They seemed too good of character to be thrown away so quickly. I also really liked how you actually had him finish off h...

WorldlyWiseman wrote: ↑

Mon May 14, 2018 10:13 pm

Number five was probably going to be Akio I guess, but who was the sixth character intended to be? Takashi?

Yes. otherwise he wouldn't have been in the story. I forget who was supposed to write which character though.

Once we got all the characters figured out, I wrote the first chapter and then showed it to everyone for approval and suggestions. A few changes were made, things added, etc etc, and then it was posted. Everybody else went off that accepting or ignoring the details however they liked. For the beginn...