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by Oddball
Sat Aug 25, 2018 2:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Misha route with no name
Replies: 8
Views: 3396

Re: A Misha route with no name

I can't comment on the story itself because I couldn't bring myself to read more than a few lines. Just the lack of punctuation and capitalization turned me off it completely. I'd also suggest ditching the author's note. You should be able to tell us in story when this is going on and what's been ha...
by Oddball
Wed Aug 22, 2018 9:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573179

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180820 Blue Haired Girls)

except of course those two don't have blue hair :-)
And that, of course, is the important part of the story.
by Oddball
Sun Aug 19, 2018 12:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573179

Re: Yamaku Book Club ( Blue haired girls)

Image

Let's look at a story of Shizune and Suzu, Blue Haired Girls written by me.

You knew it was only a matter of time before I got around to highlighting my own work.
I hope it doesn't come across like bragging.
by Oddball
Thu Aug 16, 2018 3:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's New Hat
Replies: 9
Views: 4333

Re: Hanako's New Hat

You have to follow a link from crud's blog to another blog to find the original picture.
by Oddball
Mon Aug 13, 2018 12:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's New Hat
Replies: 9
Views: 4333

Re: Hanako's New Hat

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... oookay... really don't know what you were going for on this one. or WHY it exists.

Or why you felt the need to have the spoiler tag right in the middle of your story...

Or anything about the story, really.

I'm just ... confused.

I like the picture though. Nice and creepy.
by Oddball
Tue Aug 07, 2018 12:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Future (Complete Version)
Replies: 32
Views: 17348

Re: A Future (Complete Version)

I've read plenty of slice of life stories before but this feels like it's something different. Slice of death. It's not melodramatic, but because the simple way everything is handled, the emotional punch hits that much harder. The way the epilogues were written in a completely different context to t...
by Oddball
Sun Aug 05, 2018 10:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573179

Re: Yamaku Book Club ( Phantom Pains: Mirror Shoujo)

... has the heat died down yet? ... is it safe? Either way, it's time for more bookclub! https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png I feel you deserve an extra helping ... no. A TRIPLE Helping of the bookclub this time, so here's THREE, count'em THREE, Hanako stories. There's no-kill like overkill after all. (...
by Oddball
Thu Aug 02, 2018 11:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route
Replies: 50
Views: 15086

Re: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route

Nothing I saw in the game suggests that Rin is anything other than of average intelligence. I certainly didn't pick up the idea that she was a genius. So in Rin's head everything is very complex and elucidated, but she can't make her mouth translate any of that into language effectively.... so when ...
by Oddball
Wed Aug 01, 2018 3:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 139
Views: 54434

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

You might have won this battle, but I'm gonna win the meme war!
Take some advice from the movie War Games. The only winning move is not to play.
by Oddball
Mon Jul 30, 2018 10:05 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Consolidated Calendar of Events
Replies: 20
Views: 15006

Re: Consolidated Calendar of Events

You did not get my point, the calendar on the 1st post only goes to Sept. 30th. Yes there is more to Shizune's route and it does go to just before graduation but its not on the calendar in the 1st post. The calendar ends Sept. 30 with "The Summit" and these 3 Succession, Sneaking Mission and Infini...
by Oddball
Mon Jul 30, 2018 8:50 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Consolidated Calendar of Events
Replies: 20
Views: 15006

Re: Consolidated Calendar of Events

Its because the Calendar of Events ends 30th of September and Misha birthday is November 1st.
The Japanese school year lasts from April to the next March.

Shizune's route ends on graduation.
by Oddball
Mon Jul 30, 2018 6:46 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Consolidated Calendar of Events
Replies: 20
Views: 15006

Re: Consolidated Calendar of Events

I think it's worth noting that Misha's birthday occurs before Shizune's route ends and nobody ever mentions it.

Nobody loves Misha.




Everybody eles's birth basically occurs before the route starts or after it ends (other than Hanako's.)
by Oddball
Mon Jul 23, 2018 5:34 pm
Forum: Feedback
Topic: My first visual novel
Replies: 10
Views: 4707

Re: My first visual novel

To get 100% completions you must do all girls endings, good bad and neutral. (Not all have neutral endings.) I'd say ... Shizune has a bad ending and a neutral ending Lilly has a good ending and a bad ending Hanako has a good, bad, and neutral Rin has a good and two bad Emi has a bad ending and two...
by Oddball
Sun Jul 22, 2018 2:01 pm
Forum: Feedback
Topic: My first visual novel
Replies: 10
Views: 4707

Re: My first visual novel

You left Hanako for last? Expect a gut punch of emotions on that one.

As for Misha... she does have a sex scene at one point in Shizune's route. You won't like it.

I will agree with you that Shizune was the worst of the characters.

Have you tried for the Kenji ending yet? It's amusing.