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Nicely done. The story had a calm sleepy dreamy sort of feel to it that perfectly fits a Christmas story. The owner of the Shanghai also comes across as an interesting fellow and one I'd like to learn more about. The ending was a bit of a cop out, but I can't complain too much. It does help make the...

This has been a wonderful story so far. Despite the script format you do a great job at setting mood, atmosphere, and characters. You're Miki is just perfect. I also like what you'd done with Emi so far. The story is never on her side, but it doesn't go out of the way to make her the badguy either. ...

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png Extremist and Kosher's Lilly/Shizune goodness by Extremist_Line and Kosher Bacon in case the title didn't give it away. Ahhh... pre-release fanfic. Once the game was actually out, there was some of it that you really had to look at in a different light. Like this one...

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Fri Jan 18, 2019 9:11 am

Number 31 is a badass way to cover up a chest-scar...

Somehow I can't quite picture Hisao sporting that look.

Noise ... It's a cute idea, but doesn't really work as well as it could have. I think the joke with all the screaming would have worked better if Misha had felt more like an actual person before hand. She feels a bit too one dimensionally cheerful for most of this story. Epic ... This is a weird one...

With all the Secret Santa and various other Christmas stuff that was going on, I decided to put the Book Club on hold for a little while. In hindsight, I probably should have told people I was doing that. Anyway... It's BACK! and with a New Year, I've thought about maybe making a new banner for the ...

Glad people are still enjoying it. Not just that, but some people are writing their own "Shower Scenes" fanfic. OK. Maybe it's just me. I'm 5000 words into a divergent sequel to the "Wait until I see Misha in class..." ending, wondering "what if things didn't go quite as the girls had planned". It'...

Sorry. I couldn't even watch that video. It took less than a minute for me to be able to tell that guy had no clue what he was talking about.

That was far more interesting that I ever expected that character to be.

Nice work.

Congratulations.

I don't speak polish or anything so it doesn't affect me, but good job on finishing your project anyway.

That was a fun little game. I bit too hard in places, but well done otherwise.

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png The Night Doctor by Kirbo I don't want to explain this one. It looses impact if you're not walking into it blind. ... With that said, it's not my taste. Actually that's a lie. This would totally be my taste OUTSIDE of KS. It just doesn't work as a KS story.

That's actually kinda cute.

In creepy "get away from me weirdo" kinda way.

Not too shabby so far. You character's narration has a lot of personality in it and I like the details of how she has to remember her friends and family.

The material in it seems interesting enough but I have a hard time really getting into it. It's extremely obvious that you're not a native English speaker and your phrasing often feels still and awkward to me. You might want some help with getting your word choices to flow a little better.