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by Oddball
Sat Jun 30, 2012 7:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freaks and Friends
Replies: 171
Views: 66474

Re: Freaks and Friends

This is an interesting story so far, it seems like it will be pretty cool to see Yamaku through the eyes of this little band of misfits. Would I be correct in thinking that two of the characters are references to these two ? Yup. That is them. More or less. Also... "Time Warp" Tana I mean, everybod...
by Oddball
Fri Jun 29, 2012 8:16 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What third ending should Lilly and Shizune had?
Replies: 46
Views: 12963

What third ending should Lilly and Shizune had?

The others have good, bad, and neutral endings, but Lilly and Shizune only have the good or bad (or good and neutral depending on how you look at it.) So, if it had been up to you, what THIRD ending would you have liked to see for those two routes? ... Granted, I guess that means Shizune would need ...
by Oddball
Fri Jun 29, 2012 6:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freaks and Friends
Replies: 171
Views: 66474

Re: Freaks and Friends

Now for the educational post! As far as character names go, I had Hitomi, Time Warp Tan, and Hachisame to work with. Tan isn't a name but I still wanted to her to be "Time Warp Tan," so Time Warp became her nickname and I decided to use Tana as her first name. Now if my google searches didn't give m...
by Oddball
Fri Jun 29, 2012 5:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 86
Views: 26125

Re: Little Faith [ON HOLD :(]

I really wish Doomish would come back to this but alas after so long I don't think it will happen, at least we have his other great fics [ON HOLD :(] I AM coming back to it, just not until I've freed up a little space and don't have four or so stories going on at once. Kno exactly what you mean, ma...
by Oddball
Fri Jun 29, 2012 1:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freaks and Friends
Replies: 171
Views: 66474

Re: Freaks and Friends

I'll tell you this since it's not exactly a spoiler or anything, but this story does take place in their final year of High School. It's Hitomi's first year at Yamaku and Hachisame and Tana have both been attending here longer. And yes, Time Warp isn't easy to write. Glad you enjoy how she comes acr...
by Oddball
Fri Jun 29, 2012 10:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freaks and Friends
Replies: 171
Views: 66474

Freaks and Friends

Freaks and Friends Part 1 "Welcome to the Freak show." That single thought keeps rolling around my mind. I know it's rude, but I can't help it. This is where they put the broken people that the rest of the world doesn't want to deal with, and its all wrapped up in your standard cliché high school se...
by Oddball
Wed Jun 27, 2012 9:57 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Lilly's Route
Replies: 518
Views: 154658

Re: Lilly's Route

Also, [Hanako spoiler:] I really liked how Hanako became more confident and less dependent during Lilly's path. That made me happy. Some of those elements should have been implemented in Hanako's path. Well, keep in mind that in Hanako's path she's making trips to the Shanghi, the park, and even in...
by Oddball
Wed Jun 27, 2012 3:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end] [now with epilogue]
Replies: 56
Views: 15462

Re: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end] [now with epilo

Harm to Hisao . I don't think she cared about Lilly, and given that she was cheating on him with half of Scotland I can't really get too worked up about her feelings on the matter. Hisao cared about Lilly. That was the whole problem. If Hisao still hasn't gotten over Lilly, hurting Lilly is NOT goi...
by Oddball
Wed Jun 27, 2012 3:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end] [now with epilogue]
Replies: 56
Views: 15462

Re: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end] [now with epilo

NemZ: I don't think she did it with the intent to do harm. So this ... "Hold on, I'm not done." Miki takes another deep breath. "Okay, so we're going out, and he still doesn't look happy. So- and this is the part you're gonna love -I fuck him. I fuck him hard. Bareback, too. Worry not, it was my de...
by Oddball
Wed Jun 27, 2012 2:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82024

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1

It's less "No one would ever do this" and more "This doesn't really follow from Hanako's good end." It's not "no one" would ever do this. It has nothing to do with straying from the good end. It's that I just can't picture Hanako and Hisao acting this way based on how they acted and what they said ...
by Oddball
Wed Jun 27, 2012 2:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end] [now with epilogue]
Replies: 56
Views: 15462

Re: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end] [now with epilo

Agreed, though just because he latching onto her for support at the end doesn't at all mean he's forgiven her or that they have much of a future together. It just means they didn't end things quite as abruptly as it first appeared. Fair enough. Not a bad way of looking at it. I've seen people forgi...
by Oddball
Wed Jun 27, 2012 12:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end] [now with epilogue]
Replies: 56
Views: 15462

Re: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end] [now with epilo

It's not a bad story, but this is a version of Hisao I cannot relate to or agree with at all.

Personally, in his place, I wouldn't have forgiven Miki. Ever. She stepped way over the line on that one.
by Oddball
Wed Jun 27, 2012 12:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 122
Views: 51125

Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)

I like the new talk between them better.
by Oddball
Tue Jun 26, 2012 11:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82024

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1

getting the characters wrong. maybe if you keep saying that it will come true See, it's things like that get you all those negative responses you hate. All I did was wonder whether if you had came out and said that this wasn't the version of the characters you saw in the games but the version from ...
by Oddball
Tue Jun 26, 2012 11:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82024

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1

Don't mean to incite another shitstorm, but yeah, a lot of people seem to forget that Hanako is a very troubled individual. There were some... odd things in store for her path in earlier drafts of KS, including but not limited to being institutionalized (and the kinda-rape scene that followed, but ...