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- Thu Jul 19, 2012 7:28 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: We never see Shizune use sign language
- Replies: 44
- Views: 21832
Re: We never see Shizune use sign language
Hisao and Misha, they learn a new language to be able to talk to her. Shizune on the other hand doesn't even like to write things down because she considers it inefficient. She doesn't really check her messages either. Now Hisao and Misha already know how to write when they meet her, so you'd think ...
- Wed Jul 18, 2012 12:35 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End
- Replies: 49
- Views: 10093
Re: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End
I'm not going to say that the events causing her blow up are more her fault than Hisao's (because hell no) but some of it is her fault. And Hisao, at the time of the blow up, is unable to understand how much of the fault is his, and the reason for that is mostly because of how she normally acts. He...
- Wed Jul 18, 2012 12:16 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End
- Replies: 49
- Views: 10093
Re: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End
It is entirely possible for you to tell Hisao to agree with Lilly and not go to Hanako's room... and then watch him completely ignore you and do it anyway. True, and I wish they had a slight change in dialogue there rather than just having him ignore it, but still, based on the events that lead you...
- Tue Jul 17, 2012 6:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Facing my Pains
- Replies: 115
- Views: 30204
Re: Facing my Pains
I have a hard time taking this seriously, as your main character seems so perfect at everything.
Also, this right here...
Also, this right here...
This is the corniest line ever.“I'm so happy that we met, and fell in love with each other”.
- Tue Jul 17, 2012 5:36 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Prediction: next year Misha, Saki, Rika, & Suzu interest
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3971
Re: Prediction: next year Misha, Saki, Rika, & Suzu interest
Personally, I'm pushing for Hachisame, Hitomi, and Time Warp Tan.
- Tue Jul 17, 2012 4:12 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End
- Replies: 49
- Views: 10093
Re: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End
she should have gone all yandere and shanked Hisao or something. that would have been interesting I've read some of the earlier ideas for the game and heard about others that involved the deaths or Rin, Hanako, Hisao,Shizune, or Misha and frankly, I'm really glad that they didn't go that route (wel...
- Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:35 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Shower Scenes
- Replies: 207
- Views: 109894
Re: Shower Scenes
I purposley decided to leave who they belonged to up to the readers imagination.
- Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:13 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Shower Scenes
- Replies: 207
- Views: 109894
Re: Shower Scenes
This last part takes a downward dip, in the form of " fox perv in the chicken underwear coop" Hisao. A pity, since so far the whole was thoroughly enjoyable, believable and funny without being overblown. I'll admit it was a bit of a departure from the previous chapters. Honestly, I had planned ting...
- Tue Jul 17, 2012 12:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Restless
- Replies: 15
- Views: 5077
Re: Restless
It's not a bad story, it just has some questionable aspects to it. The way you rush through certain things using a detached narrator sometimes make it feel like I'm getting the summary of a story rather than the story itself, and you really need to start a new paragraph whenever a different characte...
- Tue Jul 17, 2012 3:13 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End
- Replies: 49
- Views: 10093
Re: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End
Going into the city on a busy day in broad daylight is one of the hardest most uncomfortable things Hanako could be asked to do. Your choice means either you don't think she can handle it and he just wants to protect her or it shows Hisao that he might be wrong about how weak and fragile she actuall...
- Mon Jul 16, 2012 11:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Shower Scenes
- Replies: 207
- Views: 109894
Re: Shower Scenes
Shower Scenes Part 4 of 3! Laundry Boy I stood there for a moment starring at the pile of women's clothing on my bed. After trying to swallow the lump in my throat a few times, and fighting off the feeling that I should in no way be doing this sort of thing, I got to work. The first thing I had to ...
- Mon Jul 16, 2012 5:30 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369539
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/16
You've never heard anybody use that saying before?Mirage_GSM wrote:What?However, “almost only counts in horse-shoes and hand-grenades.”
- Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:51 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Touchdown Breakdown (Updated 7/30/2012)
- Replies: 47
- Views: 16715
Re: Touchdown Breakdown
This was definitely the toughest thing to sort out, because he's kind of exactly both ways. Reading him is like reading an open book that's written in strange, alien symbols and the damned book is upside down. I think the key to writing Nurse is that he manages to say one thing, changes his express...
- Mon Jul 16, 2012 2:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
- Replies: 57
- Views: 16775
Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
As far as opening lines go, that's a hell of a way to start. And I'm perfectly aware that the transit of Venus took place in 2012, not 2007. It's not canon Maybe there was another one and nobody was paying attention. Anyway, overall this is a very nice story and very well written. It does contain a ...
- Mon Jul 16, 2012 1:22 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Lilly's Route
- Replies: 518
- Views: 154658
Re: Lilly's Route
I liked how Lily's route had a much heavier emphasis on romance, although I never did figure out what made Lily fall for Hisao in the first place. I got the impression it was mostly because of the fact that he cares about Hanako, is fairly mature in his behavior, and chooses to spend time with Lill...