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by Oddball
Thu Jul 19, 2012 7:28 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: We never see Shizune use sign language
Replies: 44
Views: 21832

Re: We never see Shizune use sign language

Hisao and Misha, they learn a new language to be able to talk to her. Shizune on the other hand doesn't even like to write things down because she considers it inefficient. She doesn't really check her messages either. Now Hisao and Misha already know how to write when they meet her, so you'd think ...
by Oddball
Wed Jul 18, 2012 12:35 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End
Replies: 49
Views: 10093

Re: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End

I'm not going to say that the events causing her blow up are more her fault than Hisao's (because hell no) but some of it is her fault. And Hisao, at the time of the blow up, is unable to understand how much of the fault is his, and the reason for that is mostly because of how she normally acts. He...
by Oddball
Wed Jul 18, 2012 12:16 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End
Replies: 49
Views: 10093

Re: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End

It is entirely possible for you to tell Hisao to agree with Lilly and not go to Hanako's room... and then watch him completely ignore you and do it anyway. True, and I wish they had a slight change in dialogue there rather than just having him ignore it, but still, based on the events that lead you...
by Oddball
Tue Jul 17, 2012 6:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Facing my Pains
Replies: 115
Views: 30204

Re: Facing my Pains

I have a hard time taking this seriously, as your main character seems so perfect at everything.

Also, this right here...
“I'm so happy that we met, and fell in love with each other”.
This is the corniest line ever.
by Oddball
Tue Jul 17, 2012 5:36 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Prediction: next year Misha, Saki, Rika, & Suzu interest
Replies: 13
Views: 3971

Re: Prediction: next year Misha, Saki, Rika, & Suzu interest

Personally, I'm pushing for Hachisame, Hitomi, and Time Warp Tan.
by Oddball
Tue Jul 17, 2012 4:12 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End
Replies: 49
Views: 10093

Re: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End

she should have gone all yandere and shanked Hisao or something. that would have been interesting I've read some of the earlier ideas for the game and heard about others that involved the deaths or Rin, Hanako, Hisao,Shizune, or Misha and frankly, I'm really glad that they didn't go that route (wel...
by Oddball
Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 207
Views: 109894

Re: Shower Scenes

I purposley decided to leave who they belonged to up to the readers imagination.
by Oddball
Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 207
Views: 109894

Re: Shower Scenes

This last part takes a downward dip, in the form of " fox perv in the chicken underwear coop" Hisao. A pity, since so far the whole was thoroughly enjoyable, believable and funny without being overblown. I'll admit it was a bit of a departure from the previous chapters. Honestly, I had planned ting...
by Oddball
Tue Jul 17, 2012 12:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Restless
Replies: 15
Views: 5077

Re: Restless

It's not a bad story, it just has some questionable aspects to it. The way you rush through certain things using a detached narrator sometimes make it feel like I'm getting the summary of a story rather than the story itself, and you really need to start a new paragraph whenever a different characte...
by Oddball
Tue Jul 17, 2012 3:13 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End
Replies: 49
Views: 10093

Re: [SPOILERS] Disappointed by Hanako's Bad End

Going into the city on a busy day in broad daylight is one of the hardest most uncomfortable things Hanako could be asked to do. Your choice means either you don't think she can handle it and he just wants to protect her or it shows Hisao that he might be wrong about how weak and fragile she actuall...
by Oddball
Mon Jul 16, 2012 11:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 207
Views: 109894

Re: Shower Scenes

Shower Scenes Part 4 of 3! Laundry Boy I stood there for a moment starring at the pile of women's clothing on my bed. After trying to swallow the lump in my throat a few times, and fighting off the feeling that I should in no way be doing this sort of thing, I got to work. The first thing I had to ...
by Oddball
Mon Jul 16, 2012 5:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/16

Mirage_GSM wrote:
However, “almost only counts in horse-shoes and hand-grenades.”
What?
You've never heard anybody use that saying before?
by Oddball
Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Touchdown Breakdown (Updated 7/30/2012)
Replies: 47
Views: 16715

Re: Touchdown Breakdown

This was definitely the toughest thing to sort out, because he's kind of exactly both ways. Reading him is like reading an open book that's written in strange, alien symbols and the damned book is upside down. I think the key to writing Nurse is that he manages to say one thing, changes his express...
by Oddball
Mon Jul 16, 2012 2:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 16775

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)

As far as opening lines go, that's a hell of a way to start. And I'm perfectly aware that the transit of Venus took place in 2012, not 2007. It's not canon Maybe there was another one and nobody was paying attention. Anyway, overall this is a very nice story and very well written. It does contain a ...
by Oddball
Mon Jul 16, 2012 1:22 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Lilly's Route
Replies: 518
Views: 154658

Re: Lilly's Route

I liked how Lily's route had a much heavier emphasis on romance, although I never did figure out what made Lily fall for Hisao in the first place. I got the impression it was mostly because of the fact that he cares about Hanako, is fairly mature in his behavior, and chooses to spend time with Lill...