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This is certainly off to a very interesting start.

although he was my editor for the duration and put up with me in a way nobody really should have.

Any interesting stories there you'd care to share?

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png The last several stories I've posted have only gotten a couple of replies each. Maybe this one will capture more people's attention. 'Sweet Voice' by our very own Silentcook. This story is from 2008, way before the game actually was finished so something are a bit of...

It's certainly original.

Now you're just being stupid.

pretty sure including "gaylord" in your Miki fic is in of the terms of service for the forums Don't feel pressured to do so. Sometimes a little originality can be more important than cramming in tired memes. All times. ALL times a little originality is more important than tired memes. In fact, unle...

That's just spiffy, right there. Good job.

I do say her issues (no matter the source) are the same as a lot of those I have seen in people "on the spectrum". I understand where you're coming from with this part, but Well, that depends. You are not human if you don't have any issues like that. This part renders the first point moot. You've s...

From contact with real-life Asperger people I know that any kind of push can be devastating to them, so actually both choices would be unfortunate if I assume that Rin is dealing with anything like it (which also means I don't have experience with somebody in a state as vulnerable as Rin in that sc...

It feels a bit strange to have Hanako thinking "I'm always on edge" then to follow it up a few lines later with Muto saying that he noticed she was on edge. I think it's a bit too on the nose. One of them needs to use a different phrase. Mutou also seems a bit stiff here. I know he usually is, but y...

That's just absolutely wonderful. great work.

The only criticism I have is that Miki's skin tone seems a bit too close to Suzu's.

Overdrive by Hotkey.

Last time we took a look at a Lilly story. This time for a change of pace, we take a look at a Lilly story that has Emi in it. There's also a very rapey not very likable Hisao (as opposed to a likable rapist?)

Glad we could help you out. If there's any more specific question you have or advice you think you need, just give us a shout.

Don't know the character, but I like the art.