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The Shizune one involves Misha dying due to a car accident and Shizune committing suicide due to depression. Though, that's what I heard I heard that Misha was supposed to die in an earlier version, but I didn't know Shizune was supposed to commit suicide over it. I think the one I heard about Hana...

I can't help but picture Kenji in his best Mad Max outfit wandering around the desert (or maybe just a vacant lot somewherenear the school) narrating this entire chapter outloud to himself.

When I first played her route, I thought of School Days, so I chose to comfort Misha. I expected Shizune to be all yandere and stuff, but sadly that never happened. :roll: There was a really dark route for Shizune that got scrapped but could have easily gone that way. :lol: I remember reading an ea...

Sovereign seems a bit too forceful for Lilly. Majesty seems a bit less imposing and still get the point across.

I actually assumed that Emi was piggybacking on Rin, since I think you mentioned one large towel was wrapping them both.

That works too.

she's a character that is basically summed up by saying "do your share of the work you agreed to do, be honest, and we'll get along just fine," and that's also how she herself acts. I don't see her character that way at all. She is not a very honest person at all. She frequently lies and manipulate...

What I want to know is how Emi managed to run straight out of the shower into Hisao's room. Showering/swimming/anything involving water-immersion and prosthetic limbs is what's known as a Very Bad Thing (specially made prosthetics are waterproof, but Emi is a runner, not a swimmer, so she probably ...

Otherwise, it flows nicely, the dialogue works, and the scene with Hanako (that was Hanako, right?) was fitting. Sorry if I've angered you with my critical perspective. I know I'm not perfect. I'm not going to get angry just because you point out a flaw or two. Not to say that I didn't enjoy this c...

You start off with your character covered in Hisao's blood and sleeping with 13 girls (which frankly is pretty much all that needs to be said about the story anyway) and then you somehow make it LESS realistic from there on. The world really does revolve around your main character doesn't it? Person...

Freaks and Friends Part 4 I wake up in a strange room and my eye isn't opening. In my dull-witted half asleep state, I panic. On instinct I bring my hand to my face to rub my eye. As I feel the scar tissue that's replaced it I reminded that there isn't an eye there anymore. Then I remember everythin...

The only one I really hate seeing is Hideaki. The guy never actually does anything and his personality is flatter than a sheet of paper.

Demonix, you're not a bad writer but you really need to learn how to actually accept criticism and learn how to use it to improve your work rather than insist that you're not doing anything wrong and that anybody who finds a problem in your works is just mistaken. As I've already said (and excuse me...

Now for some explanations (and other things to clear up) before I paste the chapter in. Don't explain things like this before hand. It ruins the surprises by telling people what's going to be in the story before they read it. Also, nine times out of ten, people aren't going to questions things like...

I've been trying to properly articulate that for like ten minutes. I still don't think that's accurate.

I think I've got your meaning.

Emi's whole character and personality really pisses me off. Doubly ironic because her route hit me the hardest by far. It's chicks like her I wind up having a ridiculous predilection to, and wind up being mistakes. I like things that are bad for me, hahah. Exactly what is it about her you don't car...