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I'm trying to figure out this character's mindset and failing. So, he's looking for a teenage girl names Hanako with purple hair that was in a fire that may or may not remember him. He finds a purple haired girl of the right age with burns on her face from a fire and knows he has diabetes without hi...

Mind if I piggyback off of that? If you ARE going to write crossover fanfic of anykind, you need to examine the identity of each fandom and why it works. Now, in the casse of KS, it's mainly slice of life romance, with a nice slice of drama and a sprinkling of comedy (varrying depending on what rout...

When reading fanfic, I tend to gravitate towards the ones that feature more of the characters I've come to know and love. That doesn't mean they have to be the main characters, but having your OCs interact with the established cast would do a lot to help ground it in-universe. Still, considering the...

It certainly shows potential.

Nomiya thinks Rin wants to be an artist. To be fair, everybody that actually knows Rin seems to think that art is important to her, but in truth she just wants to be understood. Nomiya knows that being an artists is tough, but he pushes Rin and uses his own time, resources, connections, and puts his...

Silentcook wrote:...Life's a beach, and then you die?


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GODDAMMIT, now you people have gotten me doing this as well.

One of us! One of us! Gooble-gobble, gooble-gobble!

Also, a few of the later Mysteries may be action heavy as required by the plot. Keep in mind, action heavy doesn't always mean that everybody is blasting away at each other with lighting guns and automatic weapons. A simple street fight or shoot out with pistols can be action heavy. Anyway, that sc...

He makes Hanako horrible to the point she is considered to commit suicide in her bad end. 100 % False. However, as seen in the Lily route, Hanako actually does better without Hisao. Also not true. In Rin's Route, Rin destroys herself only because Hisao suggests to her to do the art gallery. In Emi'...

Yeah, Megs, you've mentioned why you don't like Lily's route a few times. People act like they actually care about each the, people change for the better, things actually happen, and plot points get resolved, which is pretty much the exact opposite of everything that happens in Shizune's route. And ...

The version without Lilly being horribly distorted is funnier.

So canonicaly(in my mind), I pass Hisao as the deceased/departed by the time he collapsed in the airport and the rest are just figments of his imagination. Yeah, but I think that has less to do with how the route's written and more to do with you being a cynical little so-and-so that hates Lilly. Y...

I have to say, I really love how Lila came out in this version.

Great job there.

I am working to correct this, though monotony might occur anyway. One of the reasons I wrote this was because I was bored; posting it was a result of writing it (I wrote all this, may as well post it. Thinking about it didn't occur until recently; it was mostly to entertain myself.) I know that fee...

I've just read this entire thing from start to ... where you are now. It's fast paced, amusing at parts, rather exciting, mostly entertaining, and (I hate to do this) also it's starting to get monotonous. You know, looking back on my earlier work, I think my emphasis on the action has degraded the o...

So much [citation needed].

Most of my info comes from comments on the Shimmie and snooping around the old development forum (and some of the really old posts here as well.)