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by Oddball
Wed Nov 28, 2012 6:02 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Thoughts on the H-scenes?
Replies: 1289
Views: 239315

Re: Thoughts on the H-scenes?

You know that's actually been a recurring problem with me, trying to explain that an item that gives one impression is in reality completely different and worth checking out. Sort of a negative world example of Katawa Shoujo is the third person shooter Spec Ops: The Line which is advertised like on...
by Oddball
Wed Nov 28, 2012 3:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 237102

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Hanako may have felt relatively comfortable around Lilly, Hisao and Akira and she may have genuinely enjoyed the attention that night, but it later turns out she wasn't completely sure how real their affection for her was. (that's her whole beef with the birthday thing...just because people are nic...
by Oddball
Tue Nov 27, 2012 5:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfic - KS Afterstory: Lilly Edition
Replies: 18
Views: 9355

Re: Fanfic - KS Afterstory: Lilly Edition

Mirage_GSM wrote:Copy that post to the Tips topic!
And DONE!
by Oddball
Tue Nov 27, 2012 5:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
Replies: 169
Views: 98322

Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)

This is script fic. Misha: Hi, I'm Misha. Don't do this. This is better. "Hi, I'm Misha," said Misha. But we can still do better than that. Let's toss in a simple adverb to describe HOW the character is saying something. "Hi, I'm Misha," said Misha happily. Now you not only have the character and th...
by Oddball
Tue Nov 27, 2012 2:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfic - KS Afterstory: Lilly Edition
Replies: 18
Views: 9355

Re: Fanfic - KS Afterstory: Lilly Edition

Well, let's give you just a real quick starter. This is what you did. Misha: Hi, I'm Misha. Don't do that. This is better. "Hi, I'm Misha," said Misha. But we can still do better than that. Let's toss in a simple adverb to describe HOW the character is saying something. "Hi, I'm Misha," said Misha h...
by Oddball
Tue Nov 27, 2012 12:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Trusting my judgement
Replies: 12
Views: 5188

Re: Trusting my judgement

Interesting...

It's not often that you get to see a story where Hisao comes across as less mentaly sound than kenji usually does.

He seems to go from dangerously unstable and manipulative to hopelessly over dramatic.
by Oddball
Mon Nov 26, 2012 11:15 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Thoughts on the H-scenes?
Replies: 1289
Views: 239315

Re: Thoughts on the H-scenes?

How exactly are you describing the game that gives them the impression it's just a "have sex with crippled girls" game? When I describe it, I refer to it as a romance story set in a school for the disabled. I may mention that "yeah, it has a little bit of nudity in it" if I'm pushed, but I certainly...
by Oddball
Mon Nov 26, 2012 8:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Ball Z Kai condensed
Replies: 8
Views: 4539

Re: Katawa Ball Z Kai condensed

My thoughts. In order. Katawa Ball Z Kai condensed Hmm... should I be worried, or is this going to be some kind of brilliant parody? This is what happens when you're sleep deprived and you've finally snapped because what you write is poorly received anyway; Oh no. This is either going to be a "woe i...
by Oddball
Sun Nov 25, 2012 1:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Red Fish Blue Fish
Replies: 24
Views: 9368

Re: Red Fish Blue Fish

While I appreciate the advice, that just isn't the story I wanted to tell. That's a bit too neat and a bit too obvious.
by Oddball
Sat Nov 24, 2012 4:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking Hearts (Breaking Bad Crossover)
Replies: 3
Views: 2234

Re: Breaking Hearts (Breaking Bad Crossover)

Also I am aware that some things contradict canon in both works... That's calling the ocean wet. Why did you make it a crossover in the first place if you keep nothing but the names? Well I could call it a parody, but it doesn't seem to fit. Okay. Then the next question would be, what actually make...
by Oddball
Fri Nov 23, 2012 6:18 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Weird situation you'd put the girls into
Replies: 189
Views: 39351

Re: Weird situation you'd put the girls into

That is... a slippery slope. Oh...that's bad then... :( ...how slippery? :lol: Do you carry inane shit, e.g. duct tape, in your authentic military backpack at all times? The authentic military version of duct tape is called "hundred mile an hour tape" (No. I don't know why it's called that) and an ...
by Oddball
Thu Nov 22, 2012 6:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Red Fish Blue Fish
Replies: 24
Views: 9368

Re: Red Fish Blue Fish

Out of all the places I've ever posted fanfic, I think I like this forum the best. There's actual discussion abut what certain things mean. I have to admit,I love the way some of you take certain things. Now while I could clarify what I meant, I think it can be more interesting not to just to see wh...
by Oddball
Thu Nov 22, 2012 3:20 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: So I've finished Shizune's story
Replies: 29
Views: 16962

Re: So I've finished Shizune's story

eh, i dont even know anymore. i know that some route someone left halfway through it, wasn't sure which one. but still, why did the drills have to go. Two words: cultural reference. It is a tradition in Japan concerning unrequited love. It's like a declaration saying 'hey, I've moved on from my pas...
by Oddball
Wed Nov 21, 2012 10:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Red Fish Blue Fish
Replies: 24
Views: 9368

Re: Red Fish Blue Fish

This is just a one shot.
by Oddball
Wed Nov 21, 2012 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Red Fish Blue Fish
Replies: 24
Views: 9368

Red Fish Blue Fish

If there was one thing Lilly had a lot of, it was books. Her parents constantly added to her collection with books in both English and Japanese. Books were very important to her. Reading was the hobby for the educated lady. Her mother told her that. Now, Lilly wasn't quite sure how reading worked ye...