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The story sends up a lot of warnings to me. Foreign student, shares many of Hisao's traits... so far though it's nothing horrible. The narrator shift between the first and part of the story and when he has his accident is a bit abrupt though. I'm also curious why you gave his girlfriend essentially ...

"Legally blind" is not the same as completely blind. Kenji can see. He just has really really poor vision.

I think the closing line about this being home would have worked better if you hadn't already used it when he first arrived.

Other than that, there's not enough here to really judge by yet.

Nice story. Shot put very powerful and emotional. Her response that Hisao had been reading too much poetry was a nice one that adds just a slight taste of humor to it. I'm not so sure I like the last line where he say "Saki, I'll see you again soon." i think the story works well enough as being a me...

I see nothing wrong with it.

What's her shirt say?


oh, and I love the ball Lily picture.

It's not Mutou's class, it's his class, and Mutou is not teaching just there but everywhere a class currently has science on their timetable. You do have a point. While Mutou taught in other classes, this was still his home room class. Hisao going there and expecting to see Mutou again and finding ...

Chapter 1: School Days The bell rings and school is officially out for the day. However there's still quite a few people more interested in asking questions to the famous guest speaker than they are in leaving. The questions go on for another fifteen minutes before Misha stands up. She politely but ...

I don't see how you can deny that Hisao at least makes some questionable decisions regarding sex. But if you legitimately think his judgment is sound in every route/path regarding sex then fair enough I guess. He does, but so does every other single character in the game. I don't consider that a de...

Hanako Fancopter requested a more detailed and in depth view on my opinions on this piece, so here it is. Considering he said he knew I wasn't going to like it from the beginning, I have no idea why he wants this, but it's not going to hurt me to play along. While you talked about doing an edgy Rika...

Given how short these videos are, they're surprisingly packed with character and emotion. It's very inspiring work.

That was a nice, short, but emotionally powerful story. I honestly don't think I have ever read a story that covers these events as they occur. Usually they're just mentioned as having happened in the past, if they're mentioned at all. The fact that Misha went to Lilly for help is an interesting ide...

It's an effective horror piece, actually, it's a pretty dark good horror story. It's just that as a KS piece it's really lacking.

That's what I'm saying, you're complaining that he's not "in character," but I have no idea what he is "supposed" to be in this sense aside from a boring audience stand-in Like I said, you don't know who he's supposed to be. Basically you're making up a new character and calling him Hisao. To an ex...

Yeah I won't really try to mount much defense for Hisao--I'm not sure what his personality is "supposed" to be outside of being a loser who lucks his way into getting laid. I've never made it a secret that I consider the typical portrayal of Hisao to be boring so I absolutely went into this story i...

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png Radioactive (or Katawa: Call of Yamaku) (or something) by Scissorlips. This is a bit longer, I hope you read it anyway because it's really good. I know a lot of people don't like the alternate universe/post apocalypse/gun toting commando stuff, but this one really ma...