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Loonie wrote:Heck, by 2027 Rin'd be a downright female Adam Jensen. I can see her now, waving her hands around and even saying in her monotone voice: "I never asked for this."

Sometimes I feel like this is the only cyborg reference anybody knows how to make.

I do like the idea behind it. It's a nice cute little one-shot. At first when I was reading it, I was a bit thrown by how none of the staff were ever identified by name. It made it feel less like they were characters and more like they were just there to say their lines. However the last bit where i...

Drascus, I don't want to be that guy , but capitalization, punctuation, things like that... they aren't going to hurt you. However, since you specified "or anything" here's something to start you off with. http://shimmie.katawa-shoujo.com/post/view/1801 I can't even find a Rin and Emi page. Start a ...

Honestly... not my best chapter. I had a hell of a time with that one. I won't bore you with the details. I do appreciate everyone chiming in and catching my more-than-usual amount of errrors this chapter, and commenting and letting me know what's working for you and what isn't. This is a pretty exp...

I'll think that many people still find it hard to accept that folks who can't see or hear, or are missing arms and legs, are average folks. They have many of the same concerns and emotions as the rest of us. But here's the thing, whenever I used to look at disabled people before I would pity them. ...

Thanks. Oh and: ("that place is a one-way street and will remain so for as long as I live." - This one was also inspired by a quote from Cpl_Crud who, in reply to some fans speculating on Hanako's likes in that area, once replied that "there will never be anything other than poo in Hanako's bum". N...

For some reason, I'm worried that by the time the sex scenes roll around, all of the characterization and any morals or dignity the characters once held will be dropped and smutty shit will happen like Akira having sex with Hisao to make sure he was "good enough" for Lilly...that's not gonna happen...

I meant the not around at all part. He mentioned it somewhere. Hisao mentioned his parents worked a lot and weren't home often. I'm not quite getting how having a job is dickish. Also he wasn't very subtle with it. Just your going deal with it. And how should he have done it, act like everything wa...

I didn't read the first version, so I don't know how that looked. Many of your sentences, especially towards the beginning seem rather abrupt and jump from topic to topic without giving the reader a chance to gain a feel fro what's happening. My eyes feel tight in their sockets as we come out of the...

addressing your first point, i don't think the credibility thing is that much of an issue, but i can see where you're coming from. i made a deliberate attempt not to model my hisao on the ks hisao. ks hisao is, for lack of a better term, incredibly vanilla. i wanted to give him some real heft as a ...

I'm a bit out of practice, but I'm willing to give it a shot.

When the game was shown to me by one of my pals from another community, he didn't tell me anything about the piece. He just gave me a link to the website and said "download for feels". So, err, try that? :D "Download for feels?" That would confuse me more than convince me to play it. I'd suggest so...

Hmm... the whole thing feels a bit too polished and perfect. The story has the feel of a overly sentimental romance novel. It's not bad, but it lacks the rawness and believability of the game. Everybody is just too perfect here, even the weather seems to bend to fit the mood.

Freaks and Friends Part 7 When I first arrived, I expected to have plenty of time to adjust to this place before school started. School starts tomorrow and I'm as lost as ever. It's not that I can't find my way around or anything, it's that I still don't know how to handle the people here. Everythin...

delta wrote:You just made me regret that I worked 5 years on this game for $0, congratulations.

If it makes you feel better, I'll give you a dollar if you ever find yourself in Florida.