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I really liked it. As for the whole "dime novel" thing. I thought it actually set the mood. It gave it the feel of a melancholy recollections told years later. The bits with Akira seemed to throw that off slightly though, especially talking about her "Squee"ing. The bit at the end with Iwanako seeme...

Well this is a really adorable story. Simple, to the point, and cute, just what I needed to get the day going.

Well, I'm done here. You obviously don't want any real feedback.

Good luck to you then.

Tea Ceremony Club is actually a fairly common club to see in Japanese schools.

In reality, the characters are already speaking Japanese, yet's it's translated into English for the readers benefit, yet for some reason you've decided not to translate certain words. So how does that work? Are they speaking some form of untranslatable super-Japanese? How would that sound when they...

Xanatos wrote:

gekiganwing wrote:If you want to change that, then start writing, coding, and creating art.

Much easier said than done.

If it was easy, everybody would be doing it.

Backing up to a few days ago, I just realized that Miyagi cannot be the English teacher for the 3rd-years after all, because she's canonically female (per "Promise of Time") and the English teacher is canonically male (per "Little Wing"). Sorry about that :( . I don't remember them mentioning the t...

griffon8 wrote:

Mirage_GSM wrote:I agree with Oddball: You're off to a very promising start.

Who?

Mirage was agreeing with me. I just hadn't posted yet.

Xanatos wrote:Speaking of waifus, the 2013 waifu wars are on if anyone cares to make a thread on that.

Yeah, but you have to have a reddit account that's at least a month old to vote, which makes this something I no longer care about.

I was wondering where you post was going until that last line.

Anyway, just because the game is over doesn't mean you've see all there is to see. Go check the fanfic section for some more good stories and the Shimmie for lots of neat art.

Ah, come on Neko, put the story back. It was rough, unpolished, but there was still quite a bit of good in it. You show some promise if you listen to criticism instead of just acting like everyone is telling you you aren't good enough. Nobody is "good enough" at first. We all have to start somewhere...

Sea wrote:

Oddball wrote:*Kenji Dub*

Well that's ludicrous, don't you know Kenji doesn't use phones? They're all being tapped by the feminists! Although really its just the americans

Which is why he's not using a real phone! Haha! I thought of everything!

And lets face it, someone who's just lost a limb, or been struck with a life threatening ailment or injury is going to feel confused, or even depressed.

Teenagers tend to be that way without the illnesses and injuries.

I get this opinion mostly because she still has her bandages on, which mean's her injury was fairly new, and I can say for a fact, most everyone would be angry in that case. But perhaps that just my take on it the whole situation. I seem to recall them saying in the game that it wasn't a new injury...