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Don't let the lack of reviews get you down. From what I've seen here so far, this is some good stuff.

I thought in shizune's route Lilly doesn't leave. Hisao runs into Lilly after the point in the timeline she should have left. Failure on the devs part iirc, plenty of ways to explain it canonically, the main one I can think of is that Lilly doesn't want to leave Hanako alone, which is what the devs...

There's a few things things that makes something Katawa Shoujo fanfic. Characters Any story featuring Rin or Hanako or whoever is by default Katawa Shoujo fanfic. Of course this brings up the topic on how much you ca change them, before they aren't Rin and Hanako anymore. If Rin has arms and isn't a...

In addition to the other suggestions, one thing that always throws me out of the stories is when author's have their characters refer to "Hanako" as "Hana."

Nobody calls Hanako that. She doesn't have a nickname; she's just Hanako.

Nice one.

That was rather pointless and unfunny.

It won't be. Even Hanako and Hisao outright admit that they still have difficulty understanding each other. But KS would have needed at least several more acts and probably several time skips before a sugar and spice ending would be believable. So it cut off at the right moment, right after the two...

I have yet to play through Hanako's path, and Lily's. Alright, here's my advise: Play Hanako's, then Lilly's. In my opinion, Hanako's route is the best, but I feel Lilly's should be saved for last since it everything seems to come full-circle in the good ending, more-so then in any other route. I'm...

I thought that all the events after Hisao's first heart attack are just a coma.

No you didn't. Stop lying.

Can you really take advantage of somebody that wants to be taken advantage of?

Hard to say. If she's actually at the point where she can honestly view people as friends, then she's doing much better than we saw her in the majority of the game. She even had a hard time accepting in her mind that Lilly and Hisao were her friends no matter how much she relied on them.

Emi's path the easiest to go down? Hmm I don't feel that way. I would think that most people would take into consideration Hisao's heart condition during that first choice in Emi's story, I know I did. That's how I always viewed it. Trying to race Emi was just asking for trouble. It's pretty much g...

I'm going to be honest here, I think you went a bit too far trying to make Rin spacey. She seems unable to relate to anything going on around her. The parts where she wasn't sure why people held out their hand and then pulled it back and the part where somebody offered her some water and she needed ...

Fealow wrote:I'm glad you both approve ^^

You've got me thinking about Emi now haha! May have to go and investigate her non good endings as I've yet to get them.

Well, what are you doing wasting time on the forum then?

Go out there and get the endings. All the endings.

Hey, just because it's old doesn't mean us writers don't want to hear what you think of our stories.

And yeah, after reading it again, I'd probably change the line you mentioned, but I think I'll just leave it for posterity sake now.