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by andros414
Wed Apr 04, 2012 2:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Regrets (One Shot)
Replies: 26
Views: 7835

Re: Regrets (One Shot)

FluffandCrunch wrote:
Mahorfeus wrote:
Otakumon wrote:Good story, but why is Mutuo beating himself up about calling Hisao's parents? That's the principal's job.
The principal is a luchador. His fingers are too muscular to hit those pesky buttons.
That's what I was going for!
I just figured it was because Mutou was Hisao's homeroom teacher. :\
by andros414
Sun Apr 01, 2012 1:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Doctor Mut-Who
Replies: 43
Views: 7576

Re: Doctor Mut-Who

The doctors had said that his heart would be the end of him, but he didn't expect the end to come like this. Hisao closed his eyes and turned his head away from the man. “ Pathetic .” Hisao shivered at the memory of the tone of that voice. That cold, unfeeling, hollow tone. “ Your form begs you to ...
by andros414
Thu Mar 29, 2012 1:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Doctor Mut-Who
Replies: 43
Views: 7576

Re: Doctor Mut-Who

Ooooh... 10th Doctor uses the Chameleon Arch (again) and goes into the life of "Akio Mutou" for a while? Or does he stay normal and keeps an eye on things at Yamaku, taking a break from his travels? Hm... this could be fun. :D
by andros414
Thu Mar 22, 2012 4:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)
Replies: 156
Views: 40398

Re: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Complete)

This is not how I thought the ending would go at all. I figured the saishoudoukin thing was just a joke at first, but I guess it didn't really turn out that way in the end anyway. I think you took the ending too quickly, and I don't want to say I'm disappointed, but all of the conflict just sort of...
by andros414
Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao: Master of Romance
Replies: 12
Views: 5233

Re: Hisao: Master of Romance

I must both curse and applaud you, Megumeru. I just read all of Hisao's lines in Johnny Bravo's voice. Damn. :lol:
by andros414
Sun Mar 18, 2012 12:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Surprise Visitor
Replies: 12
Views: 4675

Re: Surprise Visitor

Oddball wrote:Well, at least I know she likes me. … Now I'll just have to wait and see if she'll ever talk to me again.
Best line in the whole one-shot. I lol'd greatly. :lol:
by andros414
Fri Mar 16, 2012 6:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)
Replies: 156
Views: 40398

Re: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story

I have to butt in here and note that this is either going to be a depressing disaster – or a hell of a setup for a happy ending. Think about it rationally based on the medical facts we have in front of us – Lilly cannot have a child because of something physically wrong with her womb – that means t...
by andros414
Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 60608

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

Mahorfeus wrote:For some reason Saki's repetitive use of "darling" had me laughing.
I didn't so much laugh at the repeated use, but kept imagining her saying it in exaggerated English. :lol:
by andros414
Wed Mar 14, 2012 6:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction) (U 2/14/13)
Replies: 82
Views: 17945

Re: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction)

Was just about to hit "Submit" on a post about how I figured this was after Hanako's Neutral End and I looked up to the thread title and seen it spelled out right in front of me. Herp-a-derp it's bed time. :lol: I could swear, though, that I recall Hisao and Hanako being on good enough terms in the ...
by andros414
Wed Mar 14, 2012 6:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 155891

Re: Rika Story - updated 3/11/2012 - mild erotica warning

Then I hear a loud gasp. Our eyes spring open simultaneously and bind one another. Rika’s crimson eyes are glowing with sheer terror, her mouth gasping for air. I can almost see my own expression reflected on hers. She lunges forward and wraps her arms around me, weeping. I clutch her tightly to my...
by andros414
Mon Mar 12, 2012 3:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 39
Views: 6744

Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Doomish.

You are bloody effin' EVIL.

Listening to that song you hidden in the story while reading the end = Manly Tears.

I just KNOW that after each of these fics, this is Doomish:

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by andros414
Sun Mar 11, 2012 5:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction) (U 2/14/13)
Replies: 82
Views: 17945

Re: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction)

I figure I should get chapter 2 out now before I get any more ideas and try to change the story more than it needs to be. In this chapter, you're going to see just how stupid our main character can be at times. <Story Snip for quote.> And there it is. My newness to writing is definitely showing her...
by andros414
Sun Mar 11, 2012 2:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction) (U 2/14/13)
Replies: 82
Views: 17945

Re: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction)

Nice start, I'm looking forward to more chapters. I'm starting to wonder if it's not Hisao. All we know for sure is that the main character is a male, was out very late at night, doesn't remember his name or those of family/friends, and he knows a blind girl. I don't think doctors would be careless ...
by andros414
Tue Mar 06, 2012 5:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer
Replies: 46
Views: 16034

Re: A Glass of Beer

themocaw wrote:<snip> ...not Professor Akio Mutou's diatribes. "You're going to be fantastic." <snip>
A Ninth Doctor reference for the Tenth Doctor look-alike. I see what you did there. :wink:
by andros414
Sun Mar 04, 2012 6:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Graduation: Mark 2 [Shizune good end continuation, spoilers]
Replies: 8
Views: 1753

Re: Graduation: Mark 2 [Shizune good end continuation, spoil

I had the same reaction Shizune did at the end once I realized what was going on. Well played, sir. Well played indeed.