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by Beoran
Mon Apr 09, 2012 9:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Convenience and Candour
Replies: 5
Views: 2427

Re: Convenience and Candour

Hey, this is a fun idea, that deserves expansion. Thanks and keep at it! :)
by Beoran
Mon Apr 09, 2012 9:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82013

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

This is indeed a very interesting idea. However, unfortunately you failed to convince me that Hanako could or would change so quickly and rather suddenly. I'd expect a timeframe of years, not months.
by Beoran
Mon Apr 09, 2012 9:10 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Genderbender: Katawa Shonen
Replies: 252
Views: 77787

Re: Genderbender: Katawa Shonen

Well, I agree that it's best to go for it wyself, however I decided to go for finally focusssing on the game project in my signature that I've been dragging along for years now. So this idea will be on the backburner for a long time I think. Thanks for reccomending those 2 games to me, though. Since...
by Beoran
Mon Apr 09, 2012 9:01 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4863
Views: 1035341

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

When you look at it, everyone has to solve their own emotional and mental problems. Others can be there for you and assist you, but they can't magically make the problems go away. But the brain is a bit like a computer program, as long as I keep feeding in the same input the output will remain the s...
by Beoran
Sun Apr 08, 2012 8:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 44266

Re: Greater Than The Sum - Days 0 - 66pt2 now up: 8/4/12

The sex scene was a little "idealized", I guess. But I remember that, when I was a virgin, I'd imagine sex to be like that as well. I found Sex Tips For Geeks to be useful. Also, sometimes it felt a bit wordy. But it was exciting to read, so it's certainly written well enough. Another fun episode!
by Beoran
Sun Apr 08, 2012 8:02 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which two girls would you want in a non-pairing threesome?
Replies: 40
Views: 10588

Re: Which two girls would you want in a non-pairing threesom

Sorry, only threesome I had was with real women, not video game characters. (BTW, it was awkward as fuck and it is not all that cracked up to be.) Snow Storm, if what you say is true, you must be the one of the most sexually experienced persons on this forum, and that's even compared to myself, who...
by Beoran
Sun Apr 08, 2012 7:51 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4863
Views: 1035341

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

WorldyWiseman, It's not a bad idea to make developing/designing games a hobby and something else your main job. Just look at KS itself. It's a game that /cannot/ exist as a commercial game. It could only have been created because it was an earnest, noncommercial creation. I'm a normal programmer for...
by Beoran
Sun Apr 08, 2012 4:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 39
Views: 13599

Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

I enjoyed both Doomish's sad and happy stories. I don't think he has to pigeonhole himself. While the last story of our lives will surely be a bit sad, there will hopefully be many happy stories too. And when our story is over, other people's stories will begin. So I enjoy reading both kinds of stor...
by Beoran
Sat Apr 07, 2012 7:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Checkmate (A Reconciliation Epilogue)
Replies: 25
Views: 15113

Re: Checkmate (A Reconciliation Epilogue)

Im late to the party but I enjoyed this and the Reconcilliation fanfic. It's a straightforward story but those also need to be written. Hope your book pans out. :)
by Beoran
Sat Apr 07, 2012 5:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
Replies: 83
Views: 32887

Re: The Lamb and The Fox

Thanks for the story and the epilogue! I like your interpretation of Rin. She's not someone with mental problems, but someone who lives in her own world. Or rather, someone who understand the world in her own unique way. Which makes communication with others hard for her, but also means she can more...
by Beoran
Sat Apr 07, 2012 5:25 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4863
Views: 1035341

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

ArazelEternal, First of all, it sucks that you can't get professional help. I guess your best chance would be to move to Canada and get a job there... Now to be a bit harsh, but I feel like you're blaming yourself, perhaps even pitying yourself? Pity is not good. It's a form of contempt, a form of h...
by Beoran
Sat Apr 07, 2012 9:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Compromised
Replies: 17
Views: 9391

Re: Compromised

Oh, I'm glad this thread came up again. I liked this story a lot! Your original charcters are very nice, and I'm glad Misha can be a sign language teacher. You even got most Japanese culture details right too. Keep on rocking! :)
by Beoran
Sat Apr 07, 2012 1:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 44266

Re: Greater Than The Sum - Days 0 - 66pt1 now up: 3/4/12

Well, I'm glad you could appreciate my comment. Some others here don't like my incessant Japanese culture remarks, so I'll be moving them to private messages from now. As for the car crash, I didn't feel disbelief at all, actually. I think lethal car crashes are a bit overused as a plot device, for ...
by Beoran
Sat Apr 07, 2012 1:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Here's all of Doomish's old shit
Replies: 130
Views: 53213

Re: Braving the Storm [Misha/Shizune] (finished!)

Still, I'm going to quibble about the Japanese funeral customs . Will you quit doing that? I mean it's not like the information isn't useful, but it gets old to have you keep jumping into threads to tell authors they're doing it wrong. I'm sorry if this annoys you, but I'm entitled to my opinions, ...
by Beoran
Sat Apr 07, 2012 12:48 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Demo Recorded of Song About Lilly
Replies: 3
Views: 2170

Re: Demo Recorded of Song About Lilly

First of all, I like really like of the lyrics of the song. Still, there are a few places where you could stand to change them a bit. Some words are stretched over 3 notes, and that's a bit long to my taste. And some words are repeated too soon, I guess? For example, "But know that I never lied - I ...