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Nice catch Daitengu! Already fixed. Thanks!

I liked this too, I'm a sucker for forgiveness, after all, no matter how hard it is.

And another part. It looks like this story may even run up to 10 parts? Lots of exposition in this part. Part 6 -- Mysterious The faint light of morning shines though my closed eyelids. I open them and find that I'm lying in bed, covered up with a sheet and a blanket. Next to me I hear Hisao's slow ...

I know my writing is not the greatest, it's been like 10 years since I wrote any fiction. And I'm not a native English speaker either. So I'd love to get some more detailed suggestions and corrections in this thread or by PM, whatever way you prefer. If it feels a bit like an anime sub, though, that...

Dear Daggett, thank you for your story! Sometimes, when I was younger my mind would feel like a haze, and I can recognize some of the things you describe here. To help other people, you don' t have to be a knight in shining armor or a superhero. Just be there for others. Help them in ways you can he...

Part 5 - Dessert (Warning, this part is very explicit. And the writing may be not as good as before, sorry about that.) We finish our dinner. We both had three glasses of wine, and I'm feeling a bit tipsy. Hisao's face also looks a little red. Hisao asks for the check, and puts the money on the silv...

And another part, this is mostly comedy and romance. Part 4 - Concord I hand my camera to an old man and let him take a picture of us with the Triumph Arch in behind us. He returns it to me with a friendly handwave and I bow to him in thanks. We cross the street, pay for entrance, and climb the stai...

Heh, glad to see everyone is getting impatient. :lol: For us westerners it may be easy enough to say it, but as I discuss in the story, in Japan it really can be a problem. The stats are a bit old, but that pie graphs says it all: http://www.stippy.com/japan-culture/is-japan-really-sexless/ I did he...

Part 3 -- Eylsium Hisao is taking a nap on the bed. I finish unpacking and start reading the tourist guide we've brought. With small sticky paper markers we have marked the places we would like to visit. Many Japanese couples go on honeymoon in Hawaii. But I can't very well go on the beach or for a ...

Part 2 - Landing I empty my second glass of wine. I see Hisao's beer can is also empty. Everyone is about done with dinner now. The stewardesses busily pass by to pick up the garbage. The lights inside the airplane turned are off. Most people simply lean back and go to sleep. Hisao tells me he'll be...

Everyone, thanks for the comments. Sorry for the paragraph spacing I've corrected it and I'll keep it in mind for next time. I'm trying to write prose, not script, but I prefer the present tense. Following the flow of consciousness. Now to work on the next parts.

Well, here'a little Hanako story I wanted to tell for a while... more should be coming later. Hope you can enjoy it. :) Part 1 - Flight . Part 2 - Landing . Part 3 - Elysium . Part 4 - Concord . Part 5 - Dessert . (Warning, this part is very explicit!) Part 6 - Mysterious . Part 7 - Sacred . Part 8 ...

Well, I contend that if two people consent to do something together, then they're both 50% responsible. So in such a situation I'd blame Tenshin equally, if not a bit moresince he's the experienced partner. And maybe I'm just too forgiving myself. And if Hanako is the girl who just can't control her...

Hilarious! What more can I say?

I like this story, please keep at it!