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Mahorfeus, you're right, it's a bit disturbing, but they were both very drunk as Daitengu says. Champaign is often underestimated. Because of the carbonation, the alcohol gets into your blood much faster and more efficiently, so you become a lot more drunk from a bottle of champaign than from a bott...

Daitengu, Thanks for the grammar tip, I corrected it. Glad you could enjoy the chapter. I wonder what I'll be able to cook up for the next one.

Dear EyesOfLilly, thank you for your story. Sorry to sound harsh, but if there is one thing I've learned is that if you want love, you should never be satisfied with just friendship. And secondly, you have to make hay while the sun shines. Also, in a sense you have not been honest to her. You knew h...

Yes. Also notice the lessening of reflection on her side. Her stream of consciousness gets thinner as she gets more drunk. Edit: You may have noticed this widening and narrowing of her consciousness in other parts. My meaning is to show by increasing the detail of what she sees and does that she is ...

Part 8 -- Champagne (warning - very explicit!) Ten steps away from where we stand is a rather large café. While there is another customer, there are no Asian-looking people inside, so I point out a spot in the corner to Hisao and we go sit there. The other customer, a young man, sits on the other si...

Well, what I did was make a lot of save games everywhere, and try to play one Act (chapter) at the time. If that's not acceptable, and you can't make enough time in the week-ends either, you might consider either taking a holiday(if you work) or waiting until the holidays (if you're in school). KS i...

Exbando, I hope your grandma will be well. I guess such a feeling is sort of normal for people like us. Reality is something we have have armed ourself against, so even if bad things happen for real, we don't feel so much. The armor on our mind stops that from happening. Fiction is something we will...

Camoufrage, thank you for your story. As I say for many other people, please take care of your own safety and health first. I think you will need professional help. One thing I think is important is not to worry and think too much at night before going to sleep. Good sleep is very important. The mor...

Dagget, it can very well be that due to the place where you live or other factors you, haven't had the chance to meet someone who can appreciate you. But then again, friendship is a two way street. Just like you are free to appreciate or not appreciate others, others are equally free to do appreciat...

Part 7 -- Sacred I climb out of the metro with Hisao by my side. It's around noon. The sun is high in the sky I'm feeling a bit hungry, especially since I only ate two toasts for breakfast. "Is there any place we can eat?" I ask and look around left and right. Hisao looks across the street at a McDo...

Slayermaster, thank you for your story. Please focus on your own safety and health first. Everything else can wait. I don't think it's my place to give you much advice. Depression is also a physical illness, your brain is hurt out from past stress, sadness, etc. It's a bit like how someone's back ca...

Dagget, I know it's sad when you feel old friends don't care for you anymore. I don't know it it's truly the case, but the thought itself of being abandoned is painful. It's hard, but life is like this. There is no eternity, even in friendship. We are mortal, so even the best friend will some day le...

See what happens when I don't post another chapter soon?

I respectfully ask that the honorable posters here stay on topic. Please be patient and sit tight for the next part, I'm following Mirage's advice to reread more thoroughly, so it will be a bit slower. Thank you very much!

Admittedly, your situation is different in many ways, but the principle of forgiveness is always the same. Telling the truth is the first step to reestablishing trust, which is essential for any relationship to have any future. That! What the Hanako of this story did was very stupid and selfish. Th...

Mirage_GSM, that's all very good advice. I guess he problem is that I'm not very patient. When I have a story in my mind, I want to write it out as quickly as I can. It's because for me a story flows out of my fingers almost organically. Many things have happened in this story, that I hadn't planned...