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Shadow1111 The epilogue started so late in life because I wanted Hanako to look back at everything at the end of her life. In that sense it's truly an "epilogue", it takes place after everything in the life of Hanako and Hisao is said and done. As for the rest of the epilogue: I'd say, it's like thi...

Mirage_gsm, that is another mistake yes. I fixed that and a few other number mistakes now.

Nah, it's not evil, it fair. Those people who ask sexual favors from random strangers have such a thing coming to them. At least they should have the decency to talk to other people, like they are people.

I'm too afraid of the future. I'm too afraid of what I'll do and what will happen so I hesitate and let opportunities slip by me. Scorptatious, thanks for your story. I think you said it yourself. Too afraid of the future. It just has to sink in a bit more, I guess. It's OK to think of the future, ...

MIRAGE_GSM, I screwed the ages up? They're supposed to get married at 18 + 6 = 24 ... so if Hisao becomes 67 that's .. 43 years of marriage? Looks like I'll have to correct that. :p Mahorfeus, I'll admit my comedy is much better than my drama/serious stuff. The dramatic/serious parts are in there be...

This is a lovely fanfic. It made me go all aaaw...

Dear Mikka, thank you for your perspective. It's true, people are not things. Unfortunately, it's easier to pretend that they are. It's not just men, I think, I think most people have such tendencies to see at least some people not like people. I think the saying to keep in mind is "Treat other peop...

Shadow1111 and elcor, thanks for the encouraging words. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this fic. Brogurt, if you like, you can think of that last part as porn too. Just a sort of esoteric one. Nemz, who is thinking wishfully? It's called fan "fiction" for a reason. But I'm cool if you don' t like it. 8)

Notes from the author Hereare a few notes I made that explain some details about my writing "Hanako's honeymoon". This story started out simply because I was wondering how difficult it is to write a good erotic scene. I choose Hanako and Hisao out of personal preference, and also because Hanako is t...

Epilogue (may offend ,some people's sensibilities) "Hisao Nakai - Hanako Nakai" My name is painted in red, since I am still alive. Hisao... we were married for forty three years. Many things happened, good and bad, but all in all, I was very happy to be with you. And you lived longer than I had hope...

Perhaps I'd like to write more stories that continue or take place after this one. This setting has many interesting possibilities for slice of life, humor, etc. But I fear I won' t be able to spend too much time on this, apart from a final rewrite and the epilogues because I'd like to work more on ...

Part 12 -- Photo I click on the print button. One after the other, the photos of our honeymoon come out of the printer. I take them out one by one. There's actually not so many of them. But enough as en excuse. At least enough so the people I know won't think we spent our whole honeymoon in bed. Of ...

Part 11 -- Chess (warning, very explicit) I don't pay much attention to our way back. We've had an emotional morning. I will have to to keep on working on my problems, every day. But I'm sure one day they will finally become nothing more than memories. I will try to make the best out of every day. I...

Yes, Also, I can't forget that I'm doing flow of consciouness here, so there is no reason why she should not think those things. So as you say, I'll have to add all this and more to her internal monologue so the reader can figure it out easier. Thanks again for the invaluable insights!

Good point, Daitengu! That would make the flow of the story also make more sense. As I said, I'll think it over and update it in a final rewrite after I get to chapter 12 and the epilogue. (I'll put the whole story in a pastebin then too, since it probably won't fit in one post). To go further into ...