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Even though I did take some material from the game a majority of the scripting was heavily modified to try to keep the originality quota up (although there'll be some parts in the next chapter that come from the game but will be modified so that only the encounters and a small part of the script com...

that bit with Kenji was just to keep him generally out of the story If you want to keep him out of the story, why did you include him in the first place? Kenji is the easiest character to keep out of a story since he almost never comes out of his room anyway. I did want at least one major scene wit...

I don't think I'll ever get the hang of those tenses, and I've left some minor hints as to what happened to his leg in the first two chapters and I'll be letting the cat out of the bag ever so slightly as to the whole story behind his injuries throughout the story. As for your other concerns, that a...

The second chapter is finally done and is the longest I've written for a directly posted story, but that is only because I wanted to get the first day over and done with using the least amount of chapters possible (if it does mess the page a bit, I'll try and break it down into two parts). Before I ...

I doubt that it would be possible since the device has a 800 x 480 display and KS runs at 800 x 600

I've watched enough of those police shows to know that those who think because they're the law it means that they can just beat up on any suspect they arrest are in the minority which is why I wrote just one total bad egg into that scene and that person along with the first officer to put the club i...

I wasn't sure if you did which is why I posted it and he started at a walking pace and then started running, and I doubt that either the nurse or Mutou would be able to catch up. I did say those weren't good examples and I really didn't go into enough detail about his level of anger during the secon...

I'll paste these in quotes since I'm too lazy to quote the chapter twice. That only made me angrier, so I moved forwards slightly and used the wall along with Setou's shoulder to get airborne and get Setou on the floor. The second officer started to give me the same treatment I'd done with Setou alo...

Wow. Doesn't anything excite this guy or make him lose his cool? Well I counted two loosing his cool scenes. Oh great, he's providing CPR, then he's catching the perp with the teacher standing around stupidly - he's even giving orders to a policeman. Too bad there wasn't a fire for him to put out a...

Guest Poster wrote:I also recall word of Yamaku having more than one librarian and Yuuko is simply the one present most of the time.

Good catch (It's during the festival when you're heading for Lilly's route).

Yuuko works part time at the library and part time at the Shanghai.

And here's the chapter I could say has been around two months in the making (since it was something I'd had planned since I started this project). There might be a few inaccuracies, some loss in the flow of time and some urine taking but I think it all gels together (and I have at least managed to m...

Thanks you guys for the responces, your support means a lot to me in dire time like these. Anyway, here is something that happened. After perhaps an hour, it seemed Mr.Condom-in-Jacket went home, so I decided to go buy some tomatoes for what my friend is cooking while he watched the meal; I mean, e...

AlchemistR wrote:

demonix wrote:Overruled

Indubitably.

Also I think what needstofap originally posted is in breach of the no requesting rule and I don't think any writer here should be told what they should put in their story.

Also, I'm fairly certain Tanabata is mentioned in either Hanako or Lilly's route, and that Lilly would miss it while visiting Scotland. There was some kind of comment about Hisao being disappointed he wouldn't see Lilly in a yukata or something along those lines. I might have imagined that. The onl...

needstofap wrote:

Overruled