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by demonix
Fri Aug 31, 2012 6:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A New Life (Tentative Title)
Replies: 33
Views: 8555

Re: A New Life (Tentative Title)

And I am improving if what Mirage was saying is correct. Oh yes, your writing stly has improved considerably. Your first story here had run-on sentnces that went on for up to ten lines. You managed to curb that habit nicely. I actually started curbing that habit once you told me about it (chapter 2...
by demonix
Thu Aug 30, 2012 7:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lost Memories (Chapter 2 added) (WIP)
Replies: 29
Views: 12764

Re: Lost Memories (Chapter 2 added) (WIP)

I thought that I'd better post an update so everyone knows that this project hasn't been abandoned. Progress on chapter three has been going along rather slowly, since I'm now at the point where the newspaper club comes into the fray (this is just after the trip to Hokkaido) and it took a bit of thi...
by demonix
Thu Aug 30, 2012 5:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A New Life (Tentative Title)
Replies: 33
Views: 8555

Re: A New Life (Tentative Title)

So even you don't know why it happened, and now you're looking for a reason for it? That doesn't make sense. I always feel that there's a logical reason for everything that I write even if it wasn't planned and I just have to figure out why, or if it was related to something I'd already written. So...
by demonix
Thu Aug 30, 2012 4:48 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: Missing Large Portion of Screen
Replies: 5
Views: 3164

Re: Missing Large Portion of Screen

onenightblitz wrote:3. Switch to full screen, if it wouldn't hurt sacrificing the whole screen.
I don't think fullscreen mode would be an option since it doesn't work on OSX Lion (and might not work on mountain lion if that is what the OP is using).
by demonix
Tue Aug 28, 2012 5:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A New Life (Tentative Title)
Replies: 33
Views: 8555

Re: A New Life (Tentative Title)

Hey Demonix, this is great, except that I found Hanako acted quite odd although many people have said this and you have said there is a reason so i will wait patiently. So two questions. 1. When can we expect more and 2. Does this mean you have abandoned "Facing my pains" Because I really like that...
by demonix
Mon Aug 27, 2012 8:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A New Life (Tentative Title)
Replies: 33
Views: 8555

Re: A New Life (Tentative Title)

You better have a VERY good explanation for her behaviour - maybe she is on drugs? This is the first time Hanako and your OC even meet (discounting his self introduction in class, where they don't even interact.) As soon as he sees her, he immediately looks to the floor and tries to slink away, whi...
by demonix
Sun Aug 26, 2012 6:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A New Life (Tentative Title)
Replies: 33
Views: 8555

Re: A New Life (Tentative Title)

Since it seems that you're saying that I've completely messed around with Hanako's personality, I'll prove that I'm correct in the fact that I've done little to that by quoting parts that do show the original elements of her personality. The rest of the days lessons go on without any problems, but t...
by demonix
Sun Aug 26, 2012 5:32 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: conhost.exe - Virus
Replies: 1
Views: 1985

Re: conhost.exe - Virus

AVG tells me it's a moderate threat and says I should quarantine it. One thing you should do is to get rid of that placebo of an antivirus since it always does crap like this (take it from a former AVG user that ended up getting hit with the false positive affects of this program). As far as I'm aw...
by demonix
Sat Aug 25, 2012 5:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A New Life (Tentative Title)
Replies: 33
Views: 8555

Re: A New Life (Tentative Title)

Who is that person who calls herself Hanako, and what have you done to the real one? A lot of typos and a few grammar issues again... And I don't think a native english speaker would have any problems with an English test. Even if the Japanese teaching methods are... suboptimal, the language itself...
by demonix
Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A New Life (Tentative Title)
Replies: 33
Views: 8555

Re: A New Life (Tentative Title)

Even if I'd gone with the total destruction of the DVD, there would still be some emotional affects from the accident (which is what is on the DVD) which would still be present and the DVD was left in because it makes a return later on in the story. On another note, I finally managed to finish off t...
by demonix
Mon Aug 20, 2012 5:11 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Body proportions
Replies: 50
Views: 14591

Re: Body proportions

Didn't Kenji say something about there being an abnormally high number of cute girls in the school. I think you're on to something... :lol: But... how does he know that? He's legally blind and almost never leaves his room. :o If you go through Shizune's route, (I'm not sure if it's mentioned in the...
by demonix
Sun Aug 19, 2012 5:57 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: Lilly's bad end?
Replies: 6
Views: 6931

Re: Lilly's bad end?

I haven played it yet, so don't spoil anything! What's the chapter called? In the 'library', it says I've completed all of Lilly's chapters. :? There isn't any chapter for the neutral end as it follows the good end and ends when Lilly leaves for Scotland which is why there's no extra chapters (it's...
by demonix
Sun Aug 19, 2012 5:48 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: Ubuntu 12.04 - Not Starting
Replies: 6
Views: 4040

Re: Ubuntu 12.04 - Not Starting

Have you tried not using terminal to launch it since I never had any problems with it.
by demonix
Fri Aug 17, 2012 5:24 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Did Akira even get a degree for that corporate job?
Replies: 36
Views: 9135

Re: Did Akira even get a degree for that corporate job?

Akira did say that she is a lawyer at that time, but there isn't any mention of what job she had when her parents left for Scotland. It could be that she was working in another department at the company whilst she was studying for her law degree and moved into the legal department once she'd gotten ...
by demonix
Tue Aug 14, 2012 6:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Facing my Pains
Replies: 115
Views: 30201

Re: Facing my Pains

But I know enough to have a decent idea about what to write. I've decided to split the next chapter in two as it was getting a little too big to be comfortable here. I've already reached the break point, but it still needs a bit of tweaking in places and most likely won't be posted for a while since...