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This story was supposed to have more thought put into it, but you've clearly stated that I didn't have every instance thought out. However, the part of chapter one when it was known that Hanako was alive and was at Yamaku was minimally written since both of those pieces of information weren't found ...

For your first point, I did mention his interest in art in chapter one, but in my opinion it was written rather subtly so I thought that it had to be made clearer (it something I'd have to improve when introducing his other interests). You did make a valid point that I thought I'd covered completely...

Jokes aside, I don't see any reason why Hisao wouldn't be able to get his driver's license. In my country, even deaf people are allowed to drive without any special limitations. http://www.direct.gov.uk/en/Motoring/DriverLicensing/MedicalRulesForDrivers/MedicalA-Z/DG_185599 It might be the same for...

Your having to separate reader knowledge from existing plot is already a fairly large failure; your not having an answer to a valid and fairly obvious question inside the plot pushes things into scrap-and-start-over territory. If you'd read the complaints I'd gotten on my other stories when I did t...

Well, so far it's okay. You made your OC a girl magnet again, but I won't even complain about that anymore... I wonder why he goes about finding his long lost relative in the most roundabout way imaginable. He could just go to someone (Mutou, Misha or any of his classmates) and ask them "Hey, I'm l...

And here's the third. That dream sequence is probably the worst thing I've written thus far, but I wanted to have some more visible form that Karou has been affected by the incident a lot more then he's been letting on. From now it'll be business as usual with each chapter being posted once I've fin...

Here's the second of the three (I had considered removing some parts of this chapter after I'd written it since I thought that it was unnecessary for the progress of the story, but I decided to leave it in as I would have had to alter the parts of the chapter surrounding it). -----------------------...

After almost two months, a lot of writers block, an unexpected heatwave and more things that I've had to deal with then I can list in the few seconds I've set myself to write this sentence, I've finally gotten the next three chapters done (which used to be two chapters before I had to split one chap...

It's been just over a week after I posted the first chapter, and I've only had one reply with none from the usual suspects. I've either gotten the hang of things, or those who usually comment on my stories have given up on me. Regardless, here's the second chapter (and just to make everyone aware th...

Enemy | wrote:Have you gotten Lilly's bad ending?

The OP is talking about the library and not the gallery that's missing an item.

If I'm correct, that particular item is triggered by going all out during the second run with Emi but you need to have triggered enough flags with Shizune to get that scene.

Why doesn't Hisao use his helicopter pilot's license and go meet Suzu? Big plothole, -3/10, would not read again. You seemed to have missed the point entirely. Hisao doesn't have a helicopter pilots licence since he wouldn't be able to get a drivers license let alone that because of his condition. ...

Still quite curious whether this is going to be Shizune story or change to a Hanako one or maybe if I'm lucky a Misha one :D If you look at the artwork thread for this story in the fan works section (the link is in the fist post) then you'll know which character is going to be the interest in the s...

This story originally came around a few months ago after I read the ??? regarding Hanako being an orphan thread in the public discussion section, and though about writing a story where she did have some relatives of which one comes to Yamaku to find her. However, I didn't have any idea on how to wri...

clubs are all throwing themselves on him when it's the second day of school and they should still be after just about any new students period Do you think the clubs would just focus on the first year students when a new senior student has arrived, I just took a thought about what might happen, got ...

You are missing the Python Core and the Uninstall-program . I have no idea how to get it back. :/ The main program executable is missing as well. Also I think there's a problem with file identification since in the type column, msvcr71 should be shown as application extension and not DLL file so I ...