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by CarnivalNights
Tue Mar 06, 2012 6:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gamble of Life (Hanako Bad End Spoilers)
Replies: 5
Views: 1883

Re: Gamble of Life (Hanako Bad End Spoilers)

It feels a little rushed.
by CarnivalNights
Tue Mar 06, 2012 5:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer
Replies: 46
Views: 18682

Re: A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer

Love how you make Mutou a deeper character. All Hisao did was make him sound like a socially awkward fool who hated his job.
by CarnivalNights
Mon Mar 05, 2012 1:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
Replies: 83
Views: 21659

Re: The Lamb and The Fox

Sperance wrote:You... You're enjoyin this, aren't you? Making us suffer like this. You're evil.
This. This so much. I was eagerly awaiting this continuation.
by CarnivalNights
Fri Mar 02, 2012 3:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Amendments (Complete)
Replies: 37
Views: 7713

Re: Amendments (Spoilers abound)

Great second part. A little sappy (not really a bad thing), but I like this alternate. I also really like how you lead up to the third part with that ending.
by CarnivalNights
Fri Mar 02, 2012 3:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Little Pieces
Replies: 56
Views: 14480

Re: Little Pieces

Great set of short stories. I know this topic is kind of old, but I was just skimming for fanfics I haven't read yet.
by CarnivalNights
Thu Mar 01, 2012 11:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Bowl of Noodles, a Cup of Coffee, a Glass of Beer
Replies: 46
Views: 18682

Re: A Bowl of Noodles (Saki Story)

Love that ending
by CarnivalNights
Thu Mar 01, 2012 4:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lover's Gasp, Lover's Grasp
Replies: 38
Views: 10805

Re: Lover's Gasp, Lover's Grasp

It feels weird having Rin contact Hanako and in general for Rin to actively seek her out.

I do enjoy the story though. Will you include any other game characters?
by CarnivalNights
Wed Feb 29, 2012 4:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Really Depressing Rin Fic
Replies: 22
Views: 7842

Re: A Really Depressing Rin Fic

Yup, definitely read everything in black.

Is there some kind of compendium of all your Katawa Shoujo fanfics including the <100 word shorts? I feel like marathoning through them.
by CarnivalNights
Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Train
Replies: 16
Views: 4783

Re: The Train

Interested to see how this turns out. WRITE MOAR PLEASE Wow, thanks guys. i didn't think anyone would want to read anymore. I'll start to plot out a second part, and put some more into it. Just one question... was the ending obvious? I wasn't going for a sixth sense thing there but i'm curious. My ...
by CarnivalNights
Mon Feb 27, 2012 11:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family
Replies: 38
Views: 18562

Re: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family

Mahorfeus wrote:Which Scrubs episode was it anyway?

The premise does sound vaguely familiar, but it fit so well with all this that I must have thrown it out the window.
Ben's final episode.
by CarnivalNights
Mon Feb 27, 2012 10:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Train
Replies: 16
Views: 4783

Re: The Train

Now comes the part where you keep going. :)
by CarnivalNights
Mon Feb 27, 2012 7:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Amendments (Complete)
Replies: 37
Views: 7713

Re: Amendments (Spoilers abound)

Keep going please. I like this alternate.
by CarnivalNights
Sun Feb 26, 2012 7:23 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Help me forget/get over this game
Replies: 29
Views: 6097

Re: Help me forget/get over this game

It's been three weeks, going on four and I finished every good ending branch once, replayed two and have every intention of doing the other three. I don't have the heart to do the neutral or bad endings. If you think you've gotten enough entertainment from this game, I say stop now. Going further wi...
by CarnivalNights
Sun Feb 26, 2012 4:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
Replies: 83
Views: 21659

Re: The Lamb and The Fox

*Punts a puppy after reading the last few lines*

:evil:
by CarnivalNights
Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family
Replies: 38
Views: 18562

Re: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family

Wow....loved the twist.