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by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun Jun 03, 2012 10:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 90387

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

It would seem I'm fairly late to the party, but I've finally gotten around to reading all of this. I'm very much enjoying what I've read so far, especially with this whole 'repressed bitch' thing that Saki has. A guest before espoused the idea that just because you have a... - well, I'll refrain fro...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Thu May 31, 2012 10:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Haiku for each girl!
Replies: 50
Views: 12282

Re: A Haiku for each girl!

And now, as part of a series, I present: HNNNNNNGGGG, the Haiku! Asked out in the snow. Sudden pain! A certain o- nomatopeia! I have a weakness for puppies! A certain o- nomatopeia! Hanako - moe overload! A certain o- nomatopeia! Healthy adoles- cent sex drive? A certain o- nomatopeia! "The problem ...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Thu May 31, 2012 8:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 14
Views: 4278

Re: Besties [Suzu/Miki One-shot] [Explicit Content!]

I have no statistical backing for this, but I think Miki gets more girl-on-girl than Misha does, around here. But shit, if it's all like this then I really couldn't care less. This kind of friends-who-have-seen-each-other-naked-and-make-jokes-about-fucking-each-other-raw relationship kind of reminds...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Tue May 29, 2012 8:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Haiku for each girl!
Replies: 50
Views: 12282

Re: A Haiku for each girl!

What's that you say, boy?
You wish to date my daughter?
Ha! Disrespectful!

Hi! I'm Meiko.
I'm totally not a MILF;
I'm dating the Nurse.

"What are you having?"
"Champ- ow, I mean, orange juice,
thank you, Akira."
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun May 27, 2012 4:50 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: "Can you feel the love tonight" (Shizune/Misha/Hisao/Lilly)
Replies: 79
Views: 48128

Re: "Can you feel the love tonight" (Shizune/Misha/Hisao/Lil

Inspired by a recent xkcd strip... I'm sure you recognize the song it is suppsed to be sung to without my help - it is quite distinctive... Because of TV, that conjured up alternating images of Jon Cryer and Mr. Ray singing. Not sure if want. Either way, excellent job on the rhyming, although my cu...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sat May 26, 2012 11:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 25
Views: 7342

Re: Mirror, Mirror [Hanako] [Updated 5/26]

A closet within a closet, even. Yeep. Closet-ception? YAY Mishanako! I like where this is going. I'm a little ashamed I got excited for that too, when I read about the hug. all of my sadness, all ofmy angst Just one error to catch this time, Doomish. I do wish there was even slightly more prose abo...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Fri May 25, 2012 10:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 25
Views: 7342

Re: Mirror, Mirror [Hanako]

I might be incorrect in thinking so, and I don't fancy rereading it to check, but that line about the first but always being the hardest reminded me of Cutter. Other than that, I did enjoy reading this one. Misha was the perfect person to play the foil to Hanako, both in demeanour and due to the par...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Thu May 24, 2012 7:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Doctor Mut-Who
Replies: 43
Views: 14753

Re: Doctor Mut-Who

So his plan was to use hisao as a bait to lure out the cyberman so they could... Run away from it? I've never watched any Doctor Who, but if I may put forth my hypothesis; his plan was a means to the end of acquiring on of his assistant guys that he always has. See, I know a bit of the Doctor Who m...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Thu May 24, 2012 6:20 am
Forum: Feedback
Topic: Typos found
Replies: 27
Views: 16818

Re: Typos found

Not sure if there's a proper place to put this other than here so I'll just leave the following: Scene: United Nations Line: Misha "Hm~, it's no problem, though, Hicchan~! Shicchan and I can share a room if have to. Well~, unless hers is being used for something else now." There should be the word '...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Thu May 24, 2012 5:01 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482282

Re: Ask!

In one of the CGs in Hanako's route, specifically the one which depicts Hanako's empty seat in the classroom, why is it that the other three people in the shot (Naomi, Shizune and Takashi) have no eyes? Frankly, it's scaring the shit outta me. Also, does it violate the copyright thingo for me to pri...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun May 20, 2012 6:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Death of a Student [Bad End, WIP]
Replies: 13
Views: 4484

Re: Death of a Student [Mutou fic]

Mate, you have nothing to worry about. That's what we're here for; not simply to read, but to support, encourage, and criticise where appropriate. If there's something amiss, we'll let you know, and you can choose whether or not to act on that. But in the end, just remember; this is your story, and ...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sat May 19, 2012 12:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Death of a Student [Bad End, WIP]
Replies: 13
Views: 4484

Re: Death of a Student [Mutou fic]

One short chapter isn't much to go one thus far, but depending on how this plays out, 'Post Mortem' might be an appropriate title. It's a lot more... subtle than the current title, and much more intriguing than simply untitled . Now, I noticed at several points in your first post, that series of sen...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Fri May 18, 2012 9:50 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482282

Re: Ask!

Some of us have, most haven't. Some even know each other irl from before the project. As you guessed, the distances make it very impractical. I've not met any other dev personally, so can't comment on how the meetings have been. Out of curiosity, what sort of geographical distribution are we lookin...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Tue May 15, 2012 11:04 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Curious little experience I had today.
Replies: 52
Views: 11023

Re: Curious little experience I had today.

Wow, Guest, major run on sentence there. As for the whole faimly deal, it is entirely possible that some or even all of them are only partially deaf, or even then it is entirely possible that my assumption could be mistaken and they may not even be a family after all; just three participants at a sc...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Tue May 15, 2012 4:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brogurt's Chocolatey Hanako Fanfiction (Updated Nov 26th)
Replies: 113
Views: 39230

Re: Brogurt's Chocolatey Hanako Fanfiction (Updated May 13th

I just read through all off these in one sitting. It's quite curious to see the gradual change of technique and competency over time. That being said, your stories were hit and miss. I'll spare you the trouble of repeating what everyone else has already said (that, and after over an hour of delays o...