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TheSongofRaven wrote:<snip>

I think you may have gotten the wrong thread, there, sir.

Suzu mumbling random combinations of letters and numbers in her sleep? Oh my, I wonder what they could be? Co-ordinates, perhaps? No, that's much too obvious. As for Taro... "alpha as fuck"? Man, I laughed far too loud at that. Was nice reading things from other people's perspectives though. Glad to...

<snip> Nah, you're not an idiot. I'm finding lately that what I write isn't coming out right, and this is a victim of that. When I read it now, I hate it. Same goes for Greater Than The Sum. The frequent use of "the girl", "her father" etc really grates on my nerves too. I think I might rewrite thi...

Doomish wrote:Ignore the horrorterror behind the curtain, she is of no importance.

Wizard of Oz reference detected. Not believing warning!

“Mommy, where are we going?” “Somewhere special, sweetie.” “But wheeeere?” “It’s a secret.” “Is it far? I’m tired of walking.” The little girl puffs her cheeks out and lets her shoulders droop, exaggerating her physical state. The man beside her chuckles softly at the gesture. “Well maybe you’d like...

It's not really a medley if it's just a series of recordings pasted together, but it is quite an impressive collection of performances. I'll ask the guys at Katawa Sieyu's facebook page to share it. Nice work.

Ha! Shizune snores! Loved that. Pretty sure that has nothing to do with the vocal cords though, more of a pharynx-ical thing, isn't it? I dunno. Anyway I liked the background you gave to some of the characters, and though the thought of Shizune acting as a second-in-command is a new one, I found it ...

Okay, I meant to go to bed a while ago, but I decided to finish this instead of stopping at the end of the first page. What can I say that hasn't been said already? To channel Richie Benaud; marrrvelous. I very much liked the parallels your fic drew to other routes, Lilly's in particular. There was ...

Damn Lilly's good end was amazing. I'd not seen that particular anime before, but I watched the original clip for comparison, and boy is it powerful. I had no idea what much of it meant, but it perfectly conveys the whole "life flashes before your eyes" thing. All compounded by the music. Hoo boy. I...

inquisitivenegro wrote:I thought typos = mistakes while typing, not grammatical/punctuation errors O.o

Typo is short for "typographical error", which does indeed refer to mistakes when typing/scribing, however for the sake of ease it is common to simply lump incorrect grammar and punctuation in with typos.

Oh this is gonna go down well. disgonbegood.gif Look, it's far too late for me right now and words are nigh incomprehensible, so I'm not going to reread this just to compare your proposed changes. I'm just gonna skip straight to the point and say that maybe you should just let this die. Wouldn't you...

Sorry I'm posting so late. I actually finished reading over an hour ago, but my art took some time to make. It wasn't just a 10 minute scribble this time. It is linked below. I'm not gonna bother writing out paragraph after paragraph of praise. You already know what we're all gonna say. Just keep up...

Well holy pants. I finally got through all this. You guys are making me feel bad, writing fan fiction like this. Not only is it better quality, but larger in quantity as well. I really like reading this. Aiko is a cool character, and her refusal to submit to dirty thoughts amuses me to no end. I lik...

Doomish returns! T'was a nice read. A Christmas miracle, if you will. I note a recent influx of MishMutou pairings, and though this isn't technically a pairing, the fact it focusses on them reminds me of the trend. Anyway, it's nice seeing the vulnerable side of Misha from time to time, without bein...

Oh man. Why did I read this. Why am I crying - oh wait I'm not. Not even Katawa Shoujo can do that. But I did make this. Apologies to Doomish for blatantly ripping off his Death art. I just really like his "guffawing" face. Feel free to draw it better as payment or something. So yeah. Shut up Death!...