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You switch tense often; you should pick one tense and stick to it, with certain exceptions. It's disconcerting to read one paragraph in present tense and the next in past tense for no apparent reason. For instance, here; I finally make my way to the gates of Yamaku Academy. It's a beautiful place, w...

Indeed; my original idea was to have Hanako as Mustang and Lilly as his(her) Hawkeye. However, the basis for that was thin at best; a connection to fire, and a protective feeling towards Mustang(Hanako). Then I thought of a connection on a deeper (and subtler) level that would work for Lilly -> Must...

I'm just gonna pretend like Crud's picture was inspired by Tim Burton's A Nightmare Before Christmas, and thus Misha is acting as an expy of Jack Skellington. It makes the picture much more enjoyable that way.

This reminds me greatly of a picture I saw on 4chan once. Let me see if I can find it. Warning; large image. Bang.jpg I'll never forget. Maybe one day, I can come back to this computer as an old man, just as in that image, and I can remember all the time I spent here. We might be from other places i...

The last lines of the latest chapter are the opening lines of the very first chapter of the story. That was the neutral end. There being no "Next" just like in the bad end means there's nothing after it. Which I enjoyed as always, by the way! I don't think a story's length is ever really determinat...

To elaborate: Scissorlips wrote: Previous I First To super-elaborate: please give the previous two/three chapters one more read-through. Er, I don't get it. I think maybe one or both of us are misinterpreting the other's words. When I said about the milli-scene and the next chapter, I was referring...

New pic isn't very interesting. Still good work though. Speak for yourself. I found it fascinating. Also amusing with the chibi caricatures of the 4LS devs. I can't stop smiling at Delta, he looks so funny. Heck, they all do. Also, who is the aubrun haired one meant to be? She talks about track and...

Mirage_GSM wrote:

I wish I could say we spent the rest of the day relaxing, maybe, maybe lounging around the pool, skinning grapes and eating them.

Is that some weird metaphor I don't get?

That ending was... a little jarring. I expected it to continue from that tiny little milli-scene. I do not know how that figures into the next chapter, but perhaps it would be better placed there. Currently, I feel it would be better to finish at the bad luck line. Speaking of which, MacBeth MacBeth...

Just a little crossover idea I had. Some connections might be obvious, some... less so. Also I totally screwed up Hanako/Lust's face. The mouth and nose should have been higher. Also a fair bit of colour has been lost when scanning. Oh well, too late now. http://jimrichards42.deviantart.com/art/Colo...

Also I don't recall who said it, but someone said something in the line of "Where I live in Australia, discrimination is a thing of the past, and we throw our niggers and faggots around like we do with any other word" which amused me considering the recent hate attacks on Asians living there You mi...

Good to see KS isn't being negatively recieved there. It appears they're painting it in a positive light, so all the better. Always good to see people liking KS. Explosive are necessary for one or other of the nude content of the game. Excuse me what? Google Translate, you have failed me! Please tel...

This topic is getting increasingly ridiculous. I am Australian. In Australia, the general populace's attitude towards "offensive" jokes, humour, words, etc. is somewhat more relaxed than other places in the world. There is a reason that there exists an image macro depicting the Australian flag and t...

Wait wait wait... is that Iwanako's face? After all this time, someone actually dares draw this? I thought it was established canon that her face was merely a black 'X'. MY WHOLE LIFE IS A LIE.

God, that's scary to look at for some reason. Scary, and fascinating. It's interesting to take a glance into the technical, behind-the-scenes stuff. There's some handy formats and conventions in there too, if anyone intends to make a VN of their own (though you could probably find that in a million...