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by BlackWaltzTheThird
Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369528

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 01/23/2013

Goddamnit. If it were "Just tell him" instead of "Reciprocate" I'd be all for it. But with the latter wording, it makes it expressly clear it means to tell Hisao that she loves him as well, which it appears she's not so sure about. Which makes it a lie. Which is bad. Then we have "Just kiss him", wh...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Jan 14, 2013 2:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 44268

Re: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Day 69 in particular; I'm most proud of that one. I think the peak of my literary career lies in that one chapter. In saying that, the lack of a tear disappoints me. I must do better in future! Your tears shall be mine!

I mean, no. That's weird. Thanks for reading, man.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Thu Jan 10, 2013 11:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 32585

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/7]

Just because it's fiction, doesn't mean it can't or shouldn't be believable. There's a reason why deus ex machinas and other such literary devices are bad things. On the flip side, just because they're bad, doesn't mean you can't or shouldn't have them sometimes. It can be fun. Either actualy fun, o...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Jan 07, 2013 8:12 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: GameFAQs Top 10: Top 10 Best Characters From Visual Novels
Replies: 60
Views: 16610

Re: Katawa Shoujo on GameFAQs Poll of the Day

Misplaced among novels? KS has nearly 500,000 words.Sounds like a novel to me. :P I know you're just taking the piss, but have you ever played an RPG? I'd wager their scripts are pretty damn hefty. Especially before voice acting. Also the Metal Gear Solid games, in particular number 4. Sweet Jesus ...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun Jan 06, 2013 11:20 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Looking for input on a narration project I'm starting.
Replies: 3
Views: 2453

Re: Looking for input on a narration project I'm starting.

^Indeed, although there's not much left in the way of roles available for audition. Just extras and Act 2 characters left, and they're not needed to be dealt with for a while yet. In any case, good luck!
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Fri Jan 04, 2013 3:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 32585

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]

Nopenopenopenopenopenopenope.

>Lolita

Yes. Yes. I'm a horrbile person.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Jan 02, 2013 9:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 175492

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop

I think a little sentence near the beginning saying "It's just me -who is Hanako- and Lilly here having tea" would have been nice. When I saw Lilly take the narrator's hand, I figured that this was after Lilly's route or something, told from Hisao's perspective. Hmm, I'd thought the narrator's voca...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Jan 02, 2013 8:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 175492

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop

Fireworks With an eager whisper, I mimic the words of the people on the television. My eyes flick between the darkness beyond the open window and the counter on the screen as it ticks towards its inevitable end. At last, the count reaches single digits. Three… two… one… “Happy New Year!” Synchronis...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Jan 02, 2013 8:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 175492

BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)

First, just as to ward off the friendly(?) reminders about requesting from Silentcook, I don't mean this to be a shop wherein people trade things for fanfiction. Nope-ity nope. I just liked the sound of the name. Anyway, down to business. At the time of creation, I've now written four pieces of fanf...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Dec 31, 2012 11:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 32585

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]

Oh dear. I don't want to hate you, dude. At least that content warning hasn't come into effect yet. But it's a sombre warning for chapters to come. Oh dear.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596636

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 12/31)

a robotic looking little girl Ha! “Why the fuck not MICROWAVE DINNERS!” Microwave dinner patron saint is best patron saint. All hail Kenji, the patron saint of microwave dinners! Also, I kind of feel like that scene would have a similar score to the "glasses come off" scene in Shizune's route; that...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun Dec 23, 2012 9:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Promiscuity [Rin/Emi] (1/6/13)
Replies: 21
Views: 9093

Re: Promiscuity [Rin/Emi] (12/22)

Am I the only one who didn't assume Rin wanted anything other than a literal itch scratched? Apparently I have forgotten the previous two chapters having just read them. Oh well. Actually, on that note, if it were just a regular itch, then damn, Emi, what a bitch - an unscratched itch is probably ju...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun Dec 23, 2012 9:00 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: 4LS Secret Santa 2012
Replies: 116
Views: 57054

Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Oh shit. Dat over-the-shoulder glance.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun Dec 23, 2012 2:49 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: 4LS Secret Santa 2012
Replies: 116
Views: 57054

Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Mikeinel wrote:Does that mean... the last will be... and will be drawn by...
Oh my oh my oh my oh my oh my oh my oh my oh my oh my oh my oh my oh my oh my
Oh goody, I'll be looking forward to this. I very much like that artist's work. I wonder what you requested...?
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sat Dec 22, 2012 9:40 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482448

Re: Ask!

To Aura: Was there any reason you were inspired you to use the different dialog windows and interfaces that show up in Rin's route, such as the white screen one with "Passing of Time" playing? I don't remember seeing different dialog windows? :? Check out one of Rin's rants. There's dialogue boxes ...