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Katawa Shoujo was supposed to be a regular VN because they thought it was a good idea. That is all. The inspiration is mere coincidence. So Lilly has a flaw, you say? Gasp! This just in, fictional character is not in fact a Mary Sue! Also she's not canon girl. No girl is canon girl. Everyone wishes ...

I hope you don't mean to be claiming that such culture no longer exists. I'm not Japanese nor do I live there, but I would wager a pretty penny that archetype propsers to this day. You could try asking the devs themselves, I'm sure they'd verify this. Cpl_Crud in particular, seeing as the guy has a ...

I have a bad feeling about this thread.

Damn, your Rin is pretty convincing, dude. And I gotta say Hisao's Rin was pretty spot on too. I can't help but agree with Mirage; I also smiled a lot. I was sorta reading this and playing vidya at the same time at first, but the sarcastic jibes and circular logic pulled me away from the latter pret...

The Master of Romance To the tune of: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVbQo3IOC_A Now this is the story all about how My life got flipped turned upside down. And I'd like to take a minute so ears up, foo'; I'll tell you how I became the prince of a place called Yamaku. In West Akihabara born and rai...

Carighan wrote:

Aura wrote:Just search the fanfiction subforum for topics started by 4LS members, and you'll find weird shit like these.

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The hell did I just read?!

Aren't they glorious? Or maybe that's not the word you were thinking of...

Mirage_GSM wrote:

“Today’s Monday, right?”

Really? So he had to work on a sunday?

It's not uncommon. I've worked plenty of Sundays in my time. Delicious doubletime rates. Though, I can't say I've ever been a janitor at a pharmaceutical company...

Still not sure if they had snoosnoo. But regardless, I loved it. They're both still wearing pants. I think that's as good an indicator as any. Also I would figure such an event would cause this chapter to have begun in a bed, no? HOW DO YOU GET YOUR HAIR THIS SOFT This happens to me too. It's so we...

I'm not entirely sure what you mean by brackets. Do you mean parenthetical () or quotes ""? Parentheses. I can't say I've ever heard of quotation marks being referred to as brackets, but whatever. Maybe it's different outside of Australia. Oops, the line breaks were meant to signify they were repea...

Mirage_GSM wrote:I think Keiji Mutou is Akio Mutou's brother.

Oh, you're right. Nevertheless, naming two Mutous in two sentences and only writing out one given name seems a bit silly. Why would Akio Mutou just be referred to as Mutou, especially in such a situation in which both he and another Mutou are present?

Hmm. Far too many phrases in brackets for my liking. In fact, with prose like this, there shouldn't be any at all. Mutou's first name is Akio. Severe mood whiplash with Miki. Very little reason to name brands unless the brand name is a plot point. No need to linebreak successive sentences of speech ...

Hana-banana Heh. pyrophobic Wait, what? I wasn't meaning to imply that. :? Perhaps a few changes in phrasing are in order. On a tangential note, Hanako also says that Emi "fits the stereotypes", presumably for being a lesbian/bisexual, but none of those are mentioned outright. Yeah, definitely some...

Hey, c'mon man, no need to be bitter. It's your story, you write what you want. There's no limiting factor for believeability in these forums. This is fan-fiction, not famous-author-penning-next-literary-masterpiece. Brogurt got savaged for Mendacium, but he still wrote it. You wanna write something...

The Purest Form of Love - Chapter 1: Friends First | Next [Hanako] I knew this was a bad idea. The hot sun bears down on me mercilessly, even in the shade of Lilly’s parasol, stuck on a slight angle in the sand between us. The heat is unbearable, and makes me sweat profusely on one side and swelter...

Your nurse in this chapter was so over the top that I thought this was a dream sequence at first... Agreed. The same could be said for Emi as well. “Seven 100m heats, first to four wins” states the Miki. turn lap Excuse me what? You shouldn't be turning or lapping in a 100m race. Each straight arm ...