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by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun Mar 17, 2013 9:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 915
Views: 597581

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/11]

griffon8 wrote:
BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:Fixed that for you.
Oh, now you've gone too far! :wink:
I'm sorry.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun Mar 17, 2013 9:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 915
Views: 597581

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/11]

Which is why I suspect Tetsuo will show up at the jazz club and find Akira and Hisao together having fun. How dare they! The cynic in me suspects Akira invited Hisao to the jazz club so she'd have one beauty of a reason to break up with Tetsuo if he does show up and throw a fit. Of course, that wil...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun Mar 17, 2013 9:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369526

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 03/16/2013

Helbereth wrote:presto!
Oh my god. I love it. Saved, resaved, then saved a third time.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun Mar 17, 2013 6:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]
Replies: 52
Views: 17658

Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]

pandaphil wrote:especially ones with such cute profile pics.
Really? It scares the shit out of me. It has those eyes that look like they're staring at you no matter where you stand. Like the old MLP toys.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun Mar 17, 2013 8:21 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The death of Misha... *MASSIVE SPOILERS*
Replies: 168
Views: 38548

Re: The death of Misha... *MASSIVE SPOILERS*

Doomish has some good ones. Braving the Storm is worth noting. You could also try looking through the KSG pastebin, though not having looked through there myself I can't vouch for how much or what content you may find in there.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun Mar 17, 2013 8:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]
Replies: 52
Views: 17658

Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]

I must admit I'm more concerned by your second post than your first. However, I'll not judge that, because that is not the point of this subforum. Your writing leaves a lot to be desired. You change tense often for no reason. There are very frequent spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes. While...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun Mar 17, 2013 5:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 175491

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 6th March)

While your concern for others is nice and all, I don't think action that drastic is necessary. There is adequate warning both on the contents page and the story header. People generally don't scroll so slowly as to read any noteworthy amount of a post they may be trying to avoid. I like that Misha s...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sat Mar 16, 2013 11:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369526

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 03/16/2013

Great. Now I can't help but picture Miyagi with a moustache. A hawk with a moustache. And on the topic of birds of prey, there's a very distinct and very loud "FALCON PAUUUUNCH" accompanying the slap, in my head. Because why not?
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sat Mar 16, 2013 10:33 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Grid 1
Replies: 29
Views: 9640

Re: Grid 1

Hoo boy. This topic is gonna last long, I can feel it. inb4locksandbans
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Mar 13, 2013 2:00 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: 2012 /v/GAs
Replies: 32
Views: 8469

Re: 2012 /v/GAs

KS isn't even a game it shouldn't have even been on there Is it something that you can play? yes. Is it something that you can win? yes. Then it's a game. Brogurt is either playing the devil's advocate or pointing out that you require a very loose definition of game in order for Katawa Shoujo to co...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Mar 11, 2013 8:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 915
Views: 597581

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/11]

He is my boss, but on the other hand I feel a little two-faced thinking about going out and giving a friIt takes a bit of convincing myself, buendly greeting to someone whose existence annoys me to no end. What. I think you accidentally the sentence there. Perhaps you meant, "He is my boss, but on ...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Mar 11, 2013 9:28 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The death of Misha... *MASSIVE SPOILERS*
Replies: 168
Views: 38548

Re: The death of Misha... *MASSIVE SPOILERS*

This sounds remarkably like this shitstorm that was Fyn's Disturbing Questions topic. Infer from that what you will. Katie, if you really must explore the "darker" side of things, there are certain fanfictions that do so. I don't like reading them, especially since writing one myself , and I can't s...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Mar 06, 2013 10:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 175491

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 6th March)

Now, I'm strongly against the idea of throwing one's work away, or hiding it where no one can see. That being said, I truly believe a work like this can be very dangerous. No need to hide it away somewhere (although a more significant warning may be merited). However, I would strongly recommend you...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Mar 06, 2013 9:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 175491

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 6th March)

Oh, and if you wanted to warn people about the story, you should have used keywords like "Violence", "Gore" or "Rape". I'm still not sure what you mean by "Trigger". trigger warning Web definitions A warning placed on websites, forums or e-mails to let the reader know that some content may cause gr...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Mar 06, 2013 8:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
Replies: 169
Views: 98320

Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)

I have to admit I'm guilty of this. When I go back and read my OC story now, all I see is the original cast of KS hacked apart and their various personality traits sewn onto characters with flimsy backstories and different appearances. For instance, my Naomi is essentially a Mishanako, while Miko is...