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griffon8 wrote:Oh great. Now I'm going to have to reread this whole thing again!

Are you implying that that's a bad thing?

Mut-Who wrote:Double Majors are not easy

I'm doing a Double Degree, so I know that feel.

Mut-Who wrote:can't wait to see more and

And? And what? AND WHAT?

Also, weird seeing you here. Last I saw you was like a year ago.

i loved Did actually die the boy i used to love he disappears (disappeared) forever he Typed it, given how Awful taking A Lot for granted he doesn't get the chance; . via the letter, (because/as) she was mute my Real Mother , and gave me back my Real Name She was in Scotland, (.) there (were) Bette...

Hmm. A sequel-of-sorts to "Ai", I take it? It's certainly interesting. What I got out of it was that you started with a OC? I thought it was Shizune at first, what with the muteness and mention of her her dad and all, but then when it went into the stuff about the boy with Anton-Babinski Syndrome an...

Hmm. Some things of note. The first section was in present tense, and the entire latter (beginning with "how are you doing") section in past tense. You definitely want to change on or the other to keep it consistent. Secondly, after that latter half began, the frequency of errors increased dramatica...

'running on my own' is what I think you meant here. Curses. I spent long enough checking over this that any mistakes should have been picked up. Oh well, it's fixed now. The Game is absolutely awesome. I mean you can see the ending coming from a mile away, but it's nicely written, and I love the re...

Apparently I didn't... PM me, maybe? You wrote "thinks" instead of "things", if I understand Mirage right. She's already mostly on the couch... I don't recall reading that. I had been under the impression they were standing. Amaya is slumped over on the couch with her feet on the floor Damnit. I co...

I really regret being socially retarded... While I realise the word is used correctly and in context here, I can't help but feel a bit of unease in reading it. Political correctness must be getting to me. Shit. taking a nervous step backward, and holding up her hands defensively with a look of horr...

Yamaku, School for Cripples To the tune of: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NUbTW928sMU In a cold, snowy clearing, cool wind in the trees, Note from an admirer; "after school, meet me please," Up ahead in the distance, I saw a girl tressed in black, My heart grew heavy and my throat went tight, I ha...

Yellow 13 wrote:Missing Stars

Well shit, how am I supposed to "inb4" now? I guess I could "inb4 Love Despite/Work in Progress/Driftwood" but I actually like at least one of those three projects and want most of them to turn out good. Oh well, I'll save the cynical humour for another time.

I'll refrain from pointing out things that have already been discussed. evoking images in my head I’m not sure I have any right to be seeing. Heh. Master of Romance at his best. class.”I explain A comma should replace the full stop, and a space should separate the " and the I. way.” I say Comma agai...

Oh shit my sides. I just can't. "Basket Full of Puppies That Won't Shut the Hell Up". I'm dying here.

On a side note, unless you want to make a really shitty cake, you don't put all the ingredients together at once. You add them one at a time in order, making sure that they are incorporated properly. So Rin is right for once. Not if it's a packet mix. But Rin is till right about the icing and the c...

For what it's worth, I've added that issue to the tips topic.

Another little thing to note; when using a sentence that involves a clause in the form "...X, Y, and Z", where "Z" is the person making the statement, always make sure to use the correct word out of "me" and "I". While the actual difference lies in the realm of subject vs. object, but the easy way t...