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Hmm. Well, I guess Miki's right. Shizune pretty clearly wants the D. But, being a Miki Route, that's not where this is headed. I was a little surprised that Hisao knew Miki's name, and very surprised that he knew Rika's. He (obviously) never met the latter, and the former only by virtue of being in ...

I'd suspect he'd need to do more than just apologise to Kenji to patch up that falling-out. :wink: An interesting, albeit short, oneshot. There's a few things I'd like to comment on, if I may: I cut him off This is a poor choice of speech tag, especially given the past/present tense ambiguity or the...

I was wondering the same thing myself, Mirage. I'd thought, with the sudden discussion of death, that the dog had died, and wondered where that had been mentioned. Perhaps it's still getting to that. Who knows. And that's ignoring the fact that the topic title hasn't been updated to reflect the new ...

Fascinating. Honestly I'm still not sure whether there's any solidarity in the ending/beginning of either relationship here. Maybe that ambiguity was deliberate? Maybe a harem ending could be in Hisao's future? Anyway, it was certainly a nice continuation, if a bit melodramatic at times. That bad en...

First of all, welcome to the forums! I agree with Mirage wholeheartedly. It's quite refreshing to see an idea like this, and I feel grateful for that tiny whisper of curiosity that led me here. The namelessness (in fact, the identity-lessness) works entirely in favour of the story and strengthens th...

This chapter... I don't get it, man. I mean I like dogs but come on, this is ridiculous. Agreed. Since you probably didn't see it in the /ksg/ thread, I'll repost my response from there. Some things have already been addressed by other members. >neat, well, lit side street. well-lit >"W-well, n-o, ...

When considering the cost, one must remember that oftentimes figurines are mass-produced in factories, hence the low pricetag. The OP's figurine is one of a kind, hand crafted, and so it justifies a much higher price. Keep in mind I'm not saying that that price is justified, merely that a greater pr...

Mirage_GSM wrote:Don't you have those in the US?

I'm assuming based on Helbereth's response that that's a no. We don't have them here in Australia either. There's various things that can be used as ID (e.g. vehicular licenses, passport, healthcare card, etc.) but not one single ID card specifically for that purpose.

His occasional idiot moments made sense and helped him from coming across as too perfect. While Hisao is a teenager, and often teenagers have idiotic moments, there is a big difference between "having idiotic moments" and "being so idiotic that he couldn't figure out Emi's dad had died " or "being ...

That way the only questions Mom has left to ask are related directly to the condition, The condition was what she was asking about though, and instead Aiko gives her Hisao's life story. The story she tells is the "how" of his enrolment at Yamaku, where the arrhythmia is the "why". See, look; “You'r...

Has there really been no posts since 11 AM? I was sure there'd be a bunch more by the time I managed to get home from Uni and type all this up. Anyway, here goes... ass Dang, son, you really got a thing for ass, huh? Or a thing for writing about guys who have a thing for ass. One or the other. I pro...

Hohoho man, this popped up on the /ksg/ a fair while back and stirred up a bit of controversy, mostly for DAT GUN and howshamelessly it rips off Katawa Shoujo. I wonder how it will go.

We’ve been here for about ten minutes now I always find prose in this form to be quite jarring. It's nearly fourth-wall breaking, as if the narrator is saying to the reader "hey, this is what you missed!" I would suggest writing in a form more akin to "It's only been ten minutes since we arrived......