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I noticed that several words were capitalised outside of the first in a sentence. Of those, the very hands of God ... ...allow Prince Charming into her room... These prince Charmings were now only fuel... are perfectly okay and are used correctly, though you should fix that P on the last one there. ...

Congrats on being able to attend a luxury school, though ;-) "Luxury" would not have been the word with which I would have described it. I don't know how to link individual posts, only pages. If you click on the post title at the top of each post (for instance, "Re: Pyrophobia" on my post yields ht...

This story just gets better and better, although I feel a table of content and chapter headers would help, as I keep scrolling past the chapters. Agreed. I must say I'm very much enjoying your prose, for some reason. I just feel that the choices of phrasing and language really resonate with me, som...

2) For me, call it about four thousand hours, give or take. I believe I don't hold the record for highest number of hours clocked in, either. For those that don't care to do the math, that works out to around 2 hours and 15 minutes a day on average for five years straight. I gotta say I admire the ...

Hmm... IS he at Yamaku, though? I was under the impression he had been brought to a hospital in town. I'd figured with the mention of the homeliness of the room (and its similarity to Hisao's dorm) and of the monitoring devices being considerably more discreet than usual that it sounded more like Y...

“Yeah I'm fine. Sorry” Missing period after "sorry". “Very well,” she smiles softly. While you have the formatting correct, the connecting verb is incorrect. You can't smile a sentence. You can say a sentence while smiling, which I assume is what you meant. You also forgot to put in a line break be...

Well, that was exciting. I do wonder how Hanako managed to reclaim the sword, though, as it was said to have gone skittering away after skidding into the arcade booth.

Mirage_GSM wrote:@BWT: You might know SMT better under the title "Persona"

Well yeah, I know that much, but in terms of what's actually in the games, I am clueless.

You know, I'm not sure what exactly it is that I just read... but I like it. I'm definitely intrigued. It's certainly done well enough to hook me into wanting to read more. I get the feeling it contains references to something - other than the outrightly states SMT, which I know nothing about anyway...

The Rumour Mill Everywhere I went, I heard it. The whispers. Well, that’s how they started off. Just whispers. Inevitably, though, they turned to hushed voices, then casual speech, and sometimes shouting matches. No one ever took a side. For long, anyway. Whatever story cooked up the most trouble; ...

It's been sitting up there for about a month now If it's the same kind of powdered stuff my mates and I use when hungover, it could afford to be up there a lot longer than a month with no worries at all. ...Everyone makes mistakes, Lils.” I chuckle... ...might I add.” Lilly notes... ...he does seem...

I have been quietly observing. There hasn't really been much for me to say that hasn't been covered already. I will reaffirm Mirage's suggestion to make the date and time of the first chapter more clear, as well as to make note of the decision to visit the nurse versus going to class as in the VN. I...

I'm becoming increasingly confused with regards to this story. It does not feel like a "Ritsu Route" insomuch as it feels like a "collection of unrelated but sequential vignettes about Hisao and Ritsu". If I may use a mathematical analogy, a route feels like a continuous function expressed as a grap...

I'm not sure whether that gas station analogy was poetic or purple. Either way, it was beautiful. I'll be waiting patiently for your return, sir.

I think you meant potential discreet lesbianism, since she seems unsure about whether to go for it or not. It doesn't have to go both ways for it to be lesbianism. There's plenty of it coming from Naomi, you can be sure of that. On the other hand, props for the dialogue - it's refreshing to see som...